I wrote a 200 bars. What you think?

supergangster wrote: »

That day, I feel envy and hatred for someone else's success. Is the day of my self-worth is 0.
The day I see another as a competitor. Is the day I see myself as a joke.
That day, yes the control of ignorance. Is the day my life will live on to be false.
The day I was lying. Is the day I do not feel that I'm good enough.
The day speculating instead of question sets and acting. Is that day weakness has me down.
The day I buy everything they say, is the day I sell myself.
The day I agree only to move with the flow, is the day I give up hope and dream
The day I of a norm, sterotyp is lowered, the day I was not free thought.
The day I see a kid from the hood otherwise a brother. Is the day I do not believe in ? .
That day, yes utilizes a lost instead of guiding, the day of greed and self-hatred gets its victory.
The day I push down instead of lifting up.
Is the day of my understanding I give up,
The day I do not give respect from those who give respect, is the day my mind is cracked,
That day, yes another one fears,
Is the day of ? , I duck,
The day I point to a indevid I do not know, is the day my own fingers I burn,
The day I stop being loyal to those I love and myself, the day I can never look at myself in the mirror
The day I hate on somebody group or person and not just want any swelling, is the day I sold my soul.
The day I do not stand up for who I am,
Is the day I do not my name, my soul carries,
The day I started something negative,
Is the day I sell my life,
That day, yes take advice from someone who comes with negativity, like "stupid explain" or bad tone, is the day I do not myself believe,
The day I stop having fun and laughing,
is the day I begin to despise,
The day I copy and want to be like, the day is yes mij not consider itself to be unique.
That day, yes're talking about will never happen, for as long as the well is me and ? aware that I am not a robot, product and sell without a man can not influence what I think.
But I must put the lower these barriers that people ask for they fear this flame that burns.