LE Tournament #2 ROUND ONE - C.Melendez -VS- ItzGravitation
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ItzGravitation wrote: »i think i went o hard for these dudes.
How you lost by line two
yeah you went over everyones head(no pun intended)
you should really enter the next battle -
i'm good.
Thats ? i can spit in the booth.
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ItzGravitation wrote: »i'm good.
Thats ? i can spit in the booth.
plus its biased against me here
no one is biased you just gotta keep attackin
you aint ? with me we aint gangbanging on beyonce is dope but not attackin him
you could of said:you aint ? with me we aint gangbangin on beyonce
ill beat you with a nine iron though and you can call that foreplay
or you aint ? with me we aint gangbangin on beyonce
but the nine iron hits you call that foreplay
im lava your picante i sprinkle you on entrees
you got any thing recorded? -
thedesolateone wrote: »no one is biased you just gotta keep attackin
you got any thing recorded?
Yes and no.
Stuff thats fairly old
that was me in my early stages -
ItzGravitation gets my vote. Overall I think Melendez had the better verse but it did not feel like a battle verse. I know he said that it was referencing how he felt his verse was slept on last time, but I was not around for it. And I don't feel I should have researched to understand a battle verse, you won't be doing that at any freestyle competition ya know? ItzGravitation threw more jabs, with some equally cleaver wordplay. Props to both though.
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This battle is still tied. 4-4. Next vote wins. Please EXPLAIN WELL.
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If i may i'd like to cast a vote for myself.
The reason, hell its me.
Plus i better understand my work than Melendezes even tho i liked the candy bar ? he did.
I like witty lines more than a series of words with witty ? every now and then
Dont see anywhere in the rules where i cant vote -
ItzGravitation wrote: »If i may i'd like to cast a vote for myself.
The reason, hell its me.
Plus i better understand my work than Melendezes even tho i liked the candy bar ? he did.
I like witty lines more than a series of words with witty ? every now and then
Dont see anywhere in the rules where i cant vote
when i first started battling on here i was going wrecklessy hard with the ? ? and go straight at a ? but after so many battles that was 3 rounds sometime 5 rounds per battle....that ? gets old sooo now i put in work to think and be creative with original wordplay and punches
but honestly all the wordplay not my style in the booth i spit more on street topics similar to sigel styles etc but for these battles on text i know people can't hear the flow so i give them sick punches -
oh win or lose we'll have another rematch when this is over b....every good battle deserves another yeah?
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I'm good with a rematch anytime.
and i'm not a Jew by the way, just a punch -
I'm going to find some people to vote on this battle tonight BC this needs to get resolved and it's too close so whoever has the most votes by midnight eastern time will move on and I hope who doesn't win sticks around and votes on other battles and enters the next tournament.
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Who wants some?????!?????????!!!
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after reading this battle i felt cejota came more correct because his rhymes were better and it flowed more naturally. cejota had nice wordplay.
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ItzGravitation vs C Melendez
Decent battle, My vote goes to ItzGravitation cause I felt like his rap was better suited for a battle where C Melendez joint kinda sounded like it could be a filler track on a street album. I think ItzGravitation's flow was a little better as well. Good ? . -
Both were nice. Because of the word play though, my vote goes to C.Melendez
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I really appreciate the moderators coming in here to vote. They did their thing. Only thing is, it is midnight eastern time so time is up and we're still tied lol. 6-6. I wish both battlers could advance but someone has to go. I am going to try and find some more people to vote. This is crazy. After 12 voters, still no clear winner. I am going to have to extend voting another day until tomorrow midnight ET. Up!
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this is insane,
can no winner be decided? -
Looks like I'll be the deciding vote.
I'm out celebrating my birthday but when I get home I'll definitely come vote. -
numbaz...80's baby wrote: »the way Melendez put the "wicked" and "Satan" line toghether was clever.
The last four candy bars he put at the end was sweet. I don't know if yall caught that but it's the reason y I say C. Melendez won.
Gravitation didn't impress me wit his constipated rhymes. The Big Sean/Young Money punchlines really didn't do it for me either.
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C.Melendez wrote: »last battle I lost, 1st round with bad explanations/
he or she not feeling tis...obviously ? hating/
got yall *snooping* around to peep the flow....slowly *catching vapors*/
Only 1 thing better than beating this ? ....Its stacking papers/
A ? bound to *fall* tonight by my *theory* *Its Gravitation*
Grav got *wicked* rhymes but Melendez here....His matches *Satan*/
Imma grab his face and, beat him to a pulp
Taste from the cup of defeat?....Nah Grav's taking a gulp
Heard the kids nice but not when compared to I the adult
*Lyrical Execution* taking place...Im compared to *Adolph*
Machete bleeding him here,walk away smoothly but leaving him here
? his funny lines ain't no comedians here (liking men line extra "funny")
But Keep *snicker*ing I got a gun *Kit* for *kat*
*Good bars* out of the rapper I stay kicking that
He's *butterfingers* with the Mic...he ain't firmly gripping it
Milky smooth flow like Nestle during Crunchtime...check me spitting it
real talk im feeling this right here -
Grav's ? was a bit corny and forced at times but ima give him the edge. He way came harder (super no ? ? ) than Melendez.
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my vote goes to
''itzgravitation'' simple style straight to the point
where c melendez is seeing us as dummies trying to highlight every word play he is making.
my vote to itz gravitation -
They both were good, but I liked C. Melendez's verse better. Especially the ending with the candy, made it seem cohesive and creative.
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OK. I was asked to break the tie.
Having read both verses and spit the to myself, I have to say this:
Melendez's verses had some nice lines in it (the Murder Inc/no Ashanti line, flow wise, was really good)
However, the switching from one rhyme scheme to another seemed totally random and off-bar at times. And the ABBA line was wack.
For a battle rhyme, it had some decent punchlines, but very random.
Now Grav's verse had simpler lines to it, sure.
I think the flow of his line fit better, especially the last eight bars and the candy lines. Very creative.
This is closer, cause there's flaws and strong points in each verse, but my vote goes.....
....Gravitation.
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that guy's marketing is tight, letting everyone thinking they have to break the tie.
anyway next time just ask me to vote i will do it without any incentive .
peace
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