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BlackRoses
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Mr. Poetri
I wish that you could feel
My love through these words I'm about to reveal
As my hands tremble, as I tell our little secrets
My nouns agree with verbs and my adjectives paints them a picture
When you walk by, the world stops and gazes upon your masculinity
When you speak, women listen because your words capture the essence of beauty
The inspiration of your smile gives me courage to write down
All my inner thoughts and feelings; your presence is a privilege
Your touch is like a peace that ceases the wars of my heart and soul
Your knowledge is like expressing your feelings with two words that's refreshing and captures everyone's attention
Your stare comforts the fear in my eyes that leaks smooth black lines
Lines that resemble my ballpoint pen. I just love being wherever you are
Falling in Love isn't an option but a want...a need
But I have to find you first...and it kills me
I wish that you could feel
My love through these words I'm about to reveal
As my hands tremble, as I tell our little secrets
My nouns agree with verbs and my adjectives paints them a picture
When you walk by, the world stops and gazes upon your masculinity
When you speak, women listen because your words capture the essence of beauty
The inspiration of your smile gives me courage to write down
All my inner thoughts and feelings; your presence is a privilege
Your touch is like a peace that ceases the wars of my heart and soul
Your knowledge is like expressing your feelings with two words that's refreshing and captures everyone's attention
Your stare comforts the fear in my eyes that leaks smooth black lines
Lines that resemble my ballpoint pen. I just love being wherever you are
Falling in Love isn't an option but a want...a need
But I have to find you first...and it kills me
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dam,
This jawn was nice!
Beautifully written, love the word play and the whole concept to mr poetri..
Its nice..
Keep the creativity flowing and keep sharing with us..
Peace! -
.......Thanx:)
