The Untold Story Of Real_Poet

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REAL_POETICAL
REAL_POETICAL Members Posts: 347 ✭✭
edited May 2010 in Waiting To Exhale
Decade of living it up
writing and reciting rhymes
in a world of my own
dusting off the fine print
reciting words heaven sent
dense at the thought of retiring
been through it all from sickness
and hell
lost in a mental cell
created for a mental breakdown nut case like I
times fly from the younger I or should I say he
made in 2003
book was blue and my style was new
called it diary of a Real Poet
never forget the rhymes and caliber
of a character different from the puppet creator
born on April, 18, 1985...in a hospital
fitting to lose, spirit in the sky bankrupted years later
mom almost died having thee
developed a taste from rhymes and lines as pain increased
at the age of 8 writing hip hop tune to mary had a little lamb
super soakers and etc
favorite song throw ya guns in the air
Onyx mad facing it and i'm embraced by it
rock and roll yes indeed at the age of 12
writing rhymes at 14 and it expanded to the big screen
allhiphop.com ill community
waiting to exhale in 03
poem dedicated to rose
died the same time 50 drop the "classic"
people embrace it so comes the magic
back when he met lovely poetess and poets
like Mr. Will, Lovely, and Hustla
back before a wing transformation
during his cussing and weird ambition
left the place because the community dissed his pride
still kicking that dude to this day
made a ass out of himself which was ok
that's what makes him separate from the others
honestly and dedication, progressing, and loyalty
well.....scratch that
04 dropping lines but not really getting pressed
05 when he lost his mind is when props were impressed
rip everything and had a innovative story telling lingo
collab with the best of them
one collab became something epic
the first one meh to aight
didn't like the style and she wasn't right for thee
as he developed feelings which she agree
turn around and back stabbed he
battle emerged and no winners or losers
fun and all that
gave dap and moved on with my passion
wonder if shes going to come out of retirement
need that fire from 05 when she was dropping lines
that made the choir sing higher

during the time met more poets and poetess to agree
rip the anthem, had us competing and defeating each line
one poet still cool and digging his lyrical display
awkward, unique, unorthodox and interesting
drunking style like wu tang spirit
had to compete still doing it for love to this day
time goes and ego grow
cut out to do my own thing
M.I.C vs anybody chain ganging
yet the creator of this being looking at a monster he's created
stunna shades and headphones
chucking a middle finger at the site that made him
too big headed to even make the crew unite
battling a different crew to get respect
even though he's a chosen few
donkey tail on his face
such a ? for his own squad and the people that created him
apologize and went exile

2006, after Katrina and lack of fema
plus little brother dropping something he believes in
he rebels and makes poetry that's well.....different
more efficient to the times
and lack the ruggedness of his past life
he said ? BET for crying out loud
plus the lost of his spiritual grandma
kept him without a smile
the site he once knew begin to adapt to change
different ball game and different pitchers
new talent and somewhat lack thereof
everybody riding the poetry bandwagon without a story to tell
most of the vets are gone but still he respects
the new ones are here and they manifest with the best
all in awe at the poems of the current rosters
so unique and in depth
indeed proud
getting old now 25 in spirit but 40 in net years
still growing til the headliner obituary
who knew after years of words and drive
that the poet beyond the creator
would still keep going
while the keystrokes keep mowing

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  • Tupacfan
    Tupacfan Members, Moderators Posts: 2,428 Regulator
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    Thats what's up!

    I digg this jawn.. The rhyme scheme was on point and like usually it was a good read..

    To bad I've missed the early days of WTE, I'm sure there was a pool of talent..


    And where VSOP at?? He need to lace us with something ha.
  • REAL_POETICAL
    REAL_POETICAL Members Posts: 347 ✭✭
    edited May 2010
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    thanks for checking it out...yea the earlier days of the wte were classic moments but its all in past...now its time for a new casts and more poetry to be made for the masses
  • jayy.prime
    jayy.prime Members Posts: 22
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    RP im starting to think you're TOO ready to let the old wte heads go..lol..but lemme stop, somethin' new is always good..change and all that jazz...but as always i get pulled into ur joints and can't stop reading..i can dig it homie..OH and do me a favor, and never retire..lol
  • REAL_POETICAL
    REAL_POETICAL Members Posts: 347 ✭✭
    edited May 2010
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    never that lol ....i got love for the both time eras....i missed them days of wte anthem, the free poetry thread, our collabs and etc....speaking of which.....when we going to do one for ol times sake lol....thanks for peeping the piece thoe...and don't worry i'm not retiring anytime soon or later
  • jayy.prime
    jayy.prime Members Posts: 22
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    ahh..gooood...lol...but whenever u stop hiding from me homie! gotta hop on yahoo msngr more often :-P
  • REAL_POETICAL
    REAL_POETICAL Members Posts: 347 ✭✭
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    jayy.prime wrote: »
    ahh..gooood...lol...but whenever u stop hiding from me homie! gotta hop on yahoo msngr more often :-P

    you be hiding from me...i starting to think you forgot about ya homie :(....lol but ya know the "deal" thoe
  • BlackRoses
    BlackRoses Members Posts: 407
    edited May 2010
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    Decade of living it up
    writing and reciting rhymes
    in a world of my own
    dusting off the fine print
    reciting words heaven sent
    dense at the thought of retiring
    been through it all from sickness
    and hell
    lost in a mental cell
    created for a mental breakdown nut case like I
    times fly from the younger I or should I say he
    made in 2003
    book was blue and my style was new
    called it diary of a Real Poet
    never forget the rhymes and caliber
    of a character different from the puppet creator
    born on April, 18, 1985...in a hospital
    fitting to lose, spirit in the sky bankrupted years later
    mom almost died having thee
    developed a taste from rhymes and lines as pain increased
    at the age of 8 writing hip hop tune to mary had a little lamb
    super soakers and etc
    favorite song throw ya guns in the air
    Onyx mad facing it and i'm embraced by it
    rock and roll yes indeed at the age of 12
    writing rhymes at 14 and it expanded to the big screen
    allhiphop.com ill community
    waiting to exhale in 03
    poem dedicated to rose
    died the same time 50 drop the "classic"
    people embrace it so comes the magic
    back when he met lovely poetess and poets
    like Mr. Will, Lovely, and Hustla
    back before a wing transformation
    during his cussing and weird ambition
    left the place because the community dissed his pride
    still kicking that dude to this day
    made a ass out of himself which was ok
    that's what makes him separate from the others
    honestly and dedication, progressing, and loyalty
    well.....scratch that
    04 dropping lines but not really getting pressed
    05 when he lost his mind is when props were impressed
    rip everything and had a innovative story telling lingo
    collab with the best of them
    one collab became something epic
    the first one meh to aight
    didn't like the style and she wasn't right for thee
    as he developed feelings which she agree
    turn around and back stabbed he
    battle emerged and no winners or losers
    fun and all that
    gave dap and moved on with my passion
    wonder if shes going to come out of retirement
    need that fire from 05 when she was dropping lines
    that made the choir sing higher

    during the time met more poets and poetess to agree
    rip the anthem, had us competing and defeating each line
    one poet still cool and digging his lyrical display
    awkward, unique, unorthodox and interesting
    drunking style like wu tang spirit
    had to compete still doing it for love to this day
    time goes and ego grow
    cut out to do my own thing
    M.I.C vs anybody chain ganging
    yet the creator of this being looking at a monster he's created
    stunna shades and headphones
    chucking a middle finger at the site that made him
    too big headed to even make the crew unite
    battling a different crew to get respect
    even though he's a chosen few
    donkey tail on his face
    such a ? for his own squad and the people that created him
    apologize and went exile

    2006, after Katrina and lack of fema
    plus little brother dropping something he believes in
    he rebels and makes poetry that's well.....different
    more efficient to the times
    and lack the ruggedness of his past life
    he said ? BET for crying out loud
    plus the lost of his spiritual grandma
    kept him without a smile
    the site he once knew begin to adapt to change
    different ball game and different pitchers
    new talent and somewhat lack thereof
    everybody riding the poetry bandwagon without a story to tell
    most of the vets are gone but still he respects
    the new ones are here and they manifest with the best
    all in awe at the poems of the current rosters
    so unique and in depth
    indeed proud
    getting old now 25 in spirit but 40 in net years
    still growing til the headliner obituary
    who knew after years of words and drive
    that the poet beyond the creator
    would still keep going
    while the keystrokes keep mowing

    WOW! this is basically ur autobiography in poet form....now that's lyrical talent
  • It's Mook!
    It's Mook! Members Posts: 23
    edited May 2010
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    Damn, that took me back... I been around here since '05 and to hear dat from you homie ment alot. ? I miss Joop and all dat... You put your heart into this brotha and I commend you for all ya efforts not just on dis joint, but in everything u do dog. Everytime I come on here you never let me down on da poetry tip. Much much props...
  • REAL_POETICAL
    REAL_POETICAL Members Posts: 347 ✭✭
    edited May 2010
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    thanks for the props yall

    @ mook- mannnnn joop was the truth...the collabs and the grown up feel of the place....too bad it didn't grow as a website though...i still carry the memories to this day and never forget the group that made a impact regardless of anything...i hoping for a reunion of some sort *crosses finger* for some ol times sake ? ...me, you, jay just dropping something on some reunion ? ...all in all thanks for the props and i most def keep doing what i do...its all love and respect
  • It's Mook!
    It's Mook! Members Posts: 23
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    thanks for the props yall

    @ mook- mannnnn joop was the truth...the collabs and the grown up feel of the place....too bad it didn't grow as a website though...i still carry the memories to this day and never forget the group that made a impact regardless of anything...i hoping for a reunion of some sort *crosses finger* for some ol times sake ? ...me, you, jay just dropping something on some reunion ? ...all in all thanks for the props and i most def keep doing what i do...its all love and respect

    ? , I'm down for a collabo homie. All I got out here is work & time on my hands anywayz.. Ya'll lemme know when ya'll wanna do it. 1
  • REAL_POETICAL
    REAL_POETICAL Members Posts: 347 ✭✭
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    It's Mook! wrote: »
    ? , I'm down for a collabo homie. All I got out here is work & time on my hands anywayz.. Ya'll lemme know when ya'll wanna do it. 1

    aight cool...i got plenty of time with school and just chilling...so its all up on the perfect timing for all of us to gather thoughts and ideas
  • jayy.prime
    jayy.prime Members Posts: 22
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    aight cool...i got plenty of time with school and just chilling...so its all up on the perfect timing for all of us to gather thoughts and ideas

    well DAMN ...thanks for plotting something together and not letting me know yall! ? ! lmao..but whenever yall ready, you know i'll link it up...and RP, I couldn't get ahold of you so we could decide on the title of the joint we did..so hittttt me up homie, so I can post it!
  • REAL_POETICAL
    REAL_POETICAL Members Posts: 347 ✭✭
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    jayy.prime wrote: »
    well DAMN ...thanks for plotting something together and not letting me know yall! ? ! lmao..but whenever yall ready, you know i'll link it up...and RP, I couldn't get ahold of you so we could decide on the title of the joint we did..so hittttt me up homie, so I can post it!

    lol my bad....i tried hitting you up last night but you was on some awol ? ...i'll send you a pm for the title and as far as the collab goes..i'm down....just fix up a perfect time and i'm there
  • It's Mook!
    It's Mook! Members Posts: 23
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    jayy.prime wrote: »
    well DAMN ...thanks for plotting something together and not letting me know yall! ? ! lmao..but whenever yall ready, you know i'll link it up...and RP, I couldn't get ahold of you so we could decide on the title of the joint we did..so hittttt me up homie, so I can post it!

    Oops, how can I forget about da alcoholic AA turned away...lol Hey I'm off work dis weekend so whenver ya'll wanna do it be it on Yahoo or whatever lemme know.