T@I Mail Feat Joe Jr "No Dreadlocks"..Street Single off upcoming mixtape..Love or ?
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Supreme_Mind999
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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=b9XDnUlS79Y&feature=youtu.beComments
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Well damn this ? actually hot...I was ready to hate. They some Florida ? huh?
Stop playin, where the DL link though -
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1st dude is my peoples Joe he from Gordon GA...2nd dude is me
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damn this ? wack!
i ain't even listen to it but it's wack to me already
mexicans and dreadlocks? the ? ?
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LOL...? hating for no reason..Thanks for your support..Means i'm doing sumthing right
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she give me dome when the roof gone
at the k.o.d. she leave wit me
she got friends, bring 3
i got drugs, i got drank
bend it over, juicy j gon poke it like wet paint
you say no to ratchet ? , juicy j can't -
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Supreme_Mind999 wrote: »1st dude is my peoples Joe he from Gordon GA...2nd dude is me
I suspected that might be you so I reserved ? on you. Chop your verse off and do it again my ? lol no hate but it drastically dropped the quality of the track
Your homeboy did his thing tho
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Second verse was wack
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? don't worry bout my hate and the validity of it
you should be happy i'm bumpin yo thread wit yo music in it
this ? gon get deleted or moved like a muhfucka -
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Supreme_Mind999 wrote: »
Nothing against the actual verse but it sounded like it didn't belong on the track. Your patna verse commands attention. When your verse dropped I immediately stopped bobbing my head nh. Plus you need to say your words more clear. And you aint have no standout parts (lines, ad libs) to it. It was basically filler.
No hate, it's constructive criticism -
@GZus
Thanks..It wasn't my best..I rushed it..Plus I be trying to read it off the paper and then rap it..I'mma stop doing that..
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