Put ya best sh$t up!

Ear2DaSt

If I check out your track I'll give you propz if u pretty good,kinda rewiew wit a few words!
I aint gonna be talkin ? like mainstream, but I'll try to be honest as possible to give some type of feedback!
I made this topic becuase for the most part I thought most of yall don't rap to well!
Whoever wanna do a small review feedback!

shtoopid

not my best video, but i like the song

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IQxM5yjbVt0

texasdaking88

http://www.muziboo.com/mp3/the-city-is-mine-tdk/

qawshun

here you go

Lab Baby

Quality sucks, but lyrically this is the best thing I got posted (so far)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tvJodgLh4Tw

Ear2DaSt

1.mcfly nice track add on more energy and standing out more, you can go a lil harde,listening to different coasts can sometimes help if you make sure your style is more universal ! You don't have to do that if you don't want to but bring out your style more, play a track with 10 mcs and see if you can stand out amongst them!

2.shtoopid u have pontential but you are still young, the thing about being young is that its only lasts a few years!
What kinda sucks if you had fans would be they would wanna hear your younger style but your voice gets older with time you couldn't rap the same no more! I would suggest that even tho you have your young style to work on maturing your style & lyrics! Your mature over 21 style through fourty plus you can rap about similar ? that gives your fanbase a bigger catalogue to their cllection.
Alot of young mcs have a harder time being takin more seriously as adults after and child/ young teenage career Id give the example of bow wow!

3.screwface dissing beliefs is not a good thing to do you could lose fans like that I won't jam you cuz of those type of lyrics!