New York Times (Freestyle) - Gen. Stasia *A Jewel for the 50th Anniversary of MLK's Speech*
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Gen. Stasia
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in The Reason
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http://www.audiomack.com/song/gen-stasia/new-york-times-freestyle
Yes I made the Art Work and Look at the Article i choose to Use
http://www.audiomack.com/song/gen-stasia/new-york-times-freestyle
Yes I made the Art Work and Look at the Article i choose to Use
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Soundcloud was acting Stupid so i had to use AudioMack.... Bare with me.
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Thanks King I Truly Appreciate that Support.
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Dont know how or why I forgot this but The Beginning Mixtape 9/13!
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Damn no replies...
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? is wack
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Thanks for the reply even tho I know u didn't listen.
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dope
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Thanks Sion. I'm still waiting on the rest of the Questions
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I clicked the link and I gotta say I'm feeling this. Better than I expected. Keep grinding and drop that mixtape on here when it comes out as well.
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Did ? have a hand in your jeans or your genes??
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Did ? have a hand in your jeans or your genes??
Lmaooo it was a Reference/Play on words from the Betty/Malcom line.
"Get Ya Hand out of my Pocket!"
So its basically both.
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Dope asf
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Gen. Stasia wrote: »
I'll give you some constructive criticism, i won't come off as a hater. Just keep working on your delivery and flow a little bit, the lyrics is there. -
Gen. Stasia wrote: »
I'll give you some constructive criticism, i won't come off as a hater. Just keep working on your delivery and flow a little bit, the lyrics is there.
Work on my delivery how? Scale back? Scale Forward? Enunciate my words better? More Energy?
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Gen. Stasia wrote: »Gen. Stasia wrote: »
I'll give you some constructive criticism, i won't come off as a hater. Just keep working on your delivery and flow a little bit, the lyrics is there.
Work on my delivery how? Scale back? Scale Forward? Enunciate my words better? More Energy?
It feels like you are trying to catch up with the beat sometimes, you're not all the way in the pocket yet imo. The way you stretch out words, it's really that crisp and doesn't transition well imo. -
I see what you're saying but it was just a freestyle.Gen. Stasia wrote: »Gen. Stasia wrote: »
I'll give you some constructive criticism, i won't come off as a hater. Just keep working on your delivery and flow a little bit, the lyrics is there.
Work on my delivery how? Scale back? Scale Forward? Enunciate my words better? More Energy?
It feels like you are trying to catch up with the beat sometimes, you're not all the way in the pocket yet imo. The way you stretch out words, it's really that crisp and doesn't transition well imo.
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Gen. Stasia wrote: »Gen. Stasia wrote: »
I'll give you some constructive criticism, i won't come off as a hater. Just keep working on your delivery and flow a little bit, the lyrics is there.
Work on my delivery how? Scale back? Scale Forward? Enunciate my words better? More Energy?
It feels like you are trying to catch up with the beat sometimes, you're not all the way in the pocket yet imo. The way you stretch out words, it's really that crisp and doesn't transition well imo.
Oh ok I get what u mean. Thanks ill work on that
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Just listened to the song. Your flow was off on this song, but your lyrics are there. No question about that. Glad you rapped on J. Cole,s NY Times beat, and even though it was a freestyle, this would have been a lot better if you had put this into a song format. This song was screaming out for a hook or a least a bridge.
I give it a "C"
Again, your bars are there. Keep pushing. You got that XXL push but now you got to keep showing and proving. I feel though that you take criticism better than Shenco. -
The lyrics are nice
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black caesar wrote: »Just listened to the song. Your flow was off on this song, but your lyrics are there. No question about that. Glad you rapped on J. Cole,s NY Times beat, and even though it was a freestyle, this would have been a lot better if you had put this into a song format. This song was screaming out for a hook or a least a bridge.
I give it a "C"
Again, your bars are there. Keep pushing. You got that XXL push but now you got to keep showing and proving. I feel though that you take criticism better than Shenco.
Flow off point as in I was off beat or off point as in I was in Pocket as well as I could've been?
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Wasnt
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You sounded like MC Lyte. Dope though you've improved a lot since over the years.
