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sickness speads from the illness in my head
plus dont mind living with regrets
money pays vacations days
chillin in the shade
baskin in the sun and waves
tan oil sun-bathed babes honey glazed
im enjoying my stay
bought a monet display that cost an arm and a leg
had to honor his name
it must be the shades
i partake in top grade women who resemble sade
healthy in body, lovely in face
love me a taste ,my being aches
purple haze,korean face didnt make any mistakes -
Great day to flow
Most flow comes
From the mind show
Glassware glaze, bars more
Hbdtmfpgbetiglya..barscodes
Gleaming kept information
Glassy clean code hbtahbd mo codes
Godbless ++hbdtmfpwlmhba gb love codes
Wpwfwwshbwtswmwhptlgpv++loves shows
Glazin blazin tracks like eaenyelpmbcsbof+love goes
Glazier, keeping thing glee, flow glemming, bible strong
Tight john verse make your day heaven love, care most
How glacier turns to warm hearted, but ? loves still goes! -
Higher learning, higher power
For higher up like hiearchy for hours
Call it high class mixtape, a bunch of freestyles
Its a annoying if the voice no hesitations wild
Go into building set up mic matches
Mic matches or smart matches, leaves smile
Many ways making beats, even if doesn't
Makes sense, the flow juice still rocks
This freestyle its okay, then in the future
Be something else, doesn't matter is hot
Like 2012 summer, rolling hummer
Times no ? , when flows down
There's always up jumpers, so we can
Stay mind higher, mind who's liar
When comes to destruction verses
Heavnly verse comes rolling like firestone tires
Godbless what's written, forgive our sins, life no barwires! -
Read history
We still learning
Happy 4th , what said
We keep learning, what's read
High brow, high born
Stong scriptures like hickory
Syllables, have yo voice follow
The beat or sound nicer
Than your favorite beat
Something to see or read
Can you do that like a rockband
And feel like enjoyed time of life
Welcome fireworks bbq memories
Kites, families great times, Happy 4th of July
This verse is tight, like 50 years of life, what's wiser? -
I don't really freestyle and Im not an MC
I'm more like a mental hospital escapee
About as real as reports of snowstorms in Tennessee
Legit as a Pac poser, with no goatee
Flow like a glacier, non-hip hop savior
Grab a couple of pens and just stare at the paper
Opposite of a freestyle, about as ill as a girl scout
Had to type it up twice cause the IC logged me out -
craft poems, no arms-the mind molds them
give vocals:flame throw them,holdin my ?
rhyme mogul,tat my forearms,mortals are morsels
my minds global
left,right hemisphere,equator regulator
mariqauna rolled in onion paper:awareness levitator
respectable flow, crisp delivery
"even though lifes a ? still practice chivalry"
ive smoked cigaweed drank listerine
got ? and od-ed,made love to misery
life in disarray welcomin wizardry
on a hospital cot, nobody waitin to visit me -
This freestyle is like a sport
Great educational ways
To keep m.cees busy
Many years to preach
Don't matter what race you
Are, or where it came from
Always searching, when I found it
Had to share it, pass the flow
English, sound better eucharist
Let the show gone if you soft
Or hard, fighter or lover
Respect the family like sister
Or brother, father or mother
Thank yal flow like no other!
We still the best, just had to try
Harder, so our love for ?
Grows larger, cleaning the world
These freestyle is for everyone
No vodoo, or bad visual
Ethanol words of euphemism
Loves is great like life Eurasian
Neva been there but Heaven
Seems special, gardens full
Ether, ethernet, love now or gather
Cause later can be late, but ?
Loves all like angles or heaven guesser! -
Freestyle speak words
Like Maccabees, kingdom words secure
Like king of Egypt, reading the persecution
Learning the life of Israel and Jerusalem
Praying for many, while focusing like
Campaign of Egyptians, respecting
What's bright, then solved the force
Of Kingdoms! -
Still praying for the sick and the poor
What eva we do its been judge hard core
Many levels, but choosed the chosen doors
We went through places, and ace them with hearts
And spades, reading codes lghbtfssfatfelfhbt codes of parts
Talking about cars, reading more about palms
Then bad charts, the land is beautiful, its freedom we stand
You dance and still make it like three fourth n defeat the wars
Astronomicaly purposely get great known like litigious course! -
Tell them we getting better then worst
Forget losing, labor is reported dismissed curse
Sending organization transportation like fast porsche
Forgive what's been done, new memory, an excuse to pass the course
Mind the fillers, the more of the flow, the better we find the punchlines
More rhymes, more syllables the better they will love flow, like wordplay verse
Productivity we need to get back transportation occupation, to get notice like book worth! -
We have the power to go to the moon in outer spaces but there are still places where people find their dinner in a dump?
Revolutions in the middle east were done by the internet but there are still a few sand ? that we let set our gas prices?
We can pervent pregnancy to the percentange of 99.9 but every day i find another female too young to raise a child?
We know we are hated by some white men but we hate our own people based on light or dark skin when will it end? -
Yo out of hell like I saw heaven
Flow like responsibilities employing
Forgiving what we saying
Studying like reasonable legal doctrine
Removed from death trap and trap games
The verse read all there rights like negligence
Invite litigation to keep away hostile hiring
But back with ? , like singing angels, ? respecting! -
I enjoy to take the time
Learn most definitions
Learn many words and
Travel the world in the
Dreamland mind, nonunion
Even this freestyle tale is fiction
Get on a spaceship, feel like medallion
Visit planets, feel the thrills like medalist
Mission, mechanically mechanism topics we listen! -
Forgive again, who care If I'm wack
Lol..at least we try, freestyle on tracks
Or make song fictions or fact
What's eva chills, teach us how to
Flow, we probly sound much better
Hopely no charge, buts this freestyle
Is for free, most of my raps don't
Care what people say, or maybe
Care a little if we become too annoying
How do you make great punchlines?
That's will excites people mind, and what
Are the best ways to rhymes without
Getting people offending, I try to talk
To a few, but I can only try different ways
Mang..use any slang..to talk any language
To find ways to communcate, ask questions
And say what's happening? -
Yo its not how we talk
We do want to be on
Positive level, pedal on
The way like top artist
That made greats raps or
Heavey metal, besides talking
Simple, we trying to rap our
Best without being greedy
But respect our flow to be
Needy, trying is always great
That's why anit leaving
Its fun you should try it
It get fun like hobby
So don't let no one put you down
If you don't know what's work on
A little talent, some whisper in silence
Saying that there rock n blues
We telling you its fun like rockband and
Dj hero, rubberband full games
Like interest inventories! -
Forget these zodiac games
Open up the bible, the best way to
Focus and maintaine
They too much poetry for poet
They become to insane
I say be wiser, tell it like
Teacher, and become artist
And listen to the lord you be
Much higher, where's the lighter
No one smokeing, its sound dorky
But hey on mic you won't be choking
Sorry I'm not a doctor, but I enjoy
To help people in any commucation
Skills, not trying to be ill from each other
We can communcate skill, and be chills in our
Thrills, freestyling can be self evaluation
Maybe use rapping a successful career talking
Rising status poet writing opportunities or like church advancing! -
Cordial with core
Of coral reef, like a shore
The freestyle became a typewriter
Heaven always typing a ghost writer
Coolheaded learning palms
Like installing coolant become
A great artistic fighter
Coordinating conjunction
We learning the coordinator
Decipher they before
They got better when
They flowed about church
On tour! -
These lines aren't important
Before we cheered, its great
To freestyle, its only to improve
Like good grades, become
Excellent no need to be
Disconnected but continue
To freestyle to discontent
Those disconsolate memories
Sensitive to strength, sentence
Will neva lose, tell more
Fixed-Sensibility stories
You with ? , will always improve! -
hahaha, I see you love yal..
you verses are coming off nice..
your growing and I love that, You haven't give up yet.. that's whats up..
keep on keeping. -
hahaha, I see you love yal..
you verses are coming off nice..
your growing and I love that, You haven't give up yet.. that's whats up..
keep on keeping.
Thanks Tupacfan for the feedback..lol...I been trying to do better, and getting help from others. My goal is make more sense, use up world play and have strong punchlines.
So Tupacfan, have you been working on any new poems lately? -
Your poems are sick. Sweet read.
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Thanks Tupacfan for the feedback..lol...I been trying to do better, and getting help from others. My goal is make more sense, use up world play and have strong punchlines.
So Tupacfan, have you been working on any new poems lately?
that's good, im glad your implementing the feedback, that's what i love about this section, talent folks helping other artists to thrive to perfection.. and just by reading the new stuff you have been posting here, I can def read and see that you have better structure.. so yea, keep up the good work and keep battling kats, go in for the gusto lol..
yea, i have been working on a lot of personal poems, I have written a whole bunch, but im saving that to get them publish and get a book full of my poems going.. hopefully really soon, it's a lot of obstacles I'm going thru right now, it's only temeporary though.. so im good. but thanks for asking btw... appreciate that, cause i'm passionate about my poetry.. let alone poetry itself. -
that's good, im glad your implementing the feedback, that's what i love about this section, talent folks helping other artists to thrive to perfection.. and just by reading the new stuff you have been posting here, I can def read and see that you have better structure.. so yea, keep up the good work and keep battling kats, go in for the gusto lol..
yea, i have been working on a lot of personal poems, I have written a whole bunch, but im saving that to get them publish and get a book full of my poems going.. hopefully really soon, it's a lot of obstacles I'm going thru right now, it's only temeporary though.. so im good. but thanks for asking btw... appreciate that, cause i'm passionate about my poetry.. let alone poetry itself.
Thanks, I been doing my best. I'm glad you are doing a great job, that great a idea have all your poems published like book when do you think it would be finish?.have you ever did any poetry shows like
Apollo, or def jam poetry shows? And made any audio album cd's? -
Like a perceptual categorization
I'm back with more freestyles
Like process of grouping
Saying the hottest things like managing
Huge quanties, showing perceptions
Comfronting stimuli consumers like a hot album
Skills giving needs, showing the point like bic pen! -
Avioding negative evaluation
Helping to influences customers
In many action like a consumer
Complaints, cognitive dissonance
Succeeding an positive evaluation
Working on cool psychological perceptions
Living the dreams, on great godly communications!
