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let me know what you think ...every tuesday i drop a new track on slayboogie.com
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thats dope keep it up!only thing is you mumbled over a few words.i like the video and i think you should be more enthusiatic with the chorus i can see a crowd screaming the chorus.well done low budget video.i think the song would be stronger if its more sense bound and less abstract in the verses.do you have others songs i could listen too?also i dont get why you put in a wu-tang reference.
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i said "coming thru like the W"........."but not in the clan".........it made sense to me idk.......what part did you think i was mumbling so i can listen back ....and the hook i was going for that laid back feel...its a laidback beat...just chillin...i dont know what you mean by the verses being abstract....and not being "sense bound"....please elaborate
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oh an http://www.slayboogie.com is where you can check all my other music out....i put out a song every tuesday
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Yes you can. I have a business and I get this all the time.
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? is smooth bro. that beat is hot, just get into it a little more. other than that ? is on point.
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Beat is nice...I think you laid back a little TOO far on the track, put a lil more life in ya flow..but overall the track is straight
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thanks for the feedback everyone @deaththreats AN @ ill-mattox....i hear what you saysing ima put some more energy next time im in the booth...thanks again for checking me out and giving some constructive criticism i really appreciate that
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also I'm looking for beats as well to any producer's that are looking to collab ...i tend to like soul or jazz sample beats with that real 90"s ny sound...if that sounds like something you do hit me up ... http://www.slayboogie.com
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Props on the video, you did a good job, keep up the good skills...good luck on the music!