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its over: 2012! wrote: »niggu. please. you couldn't murk me, anywhere
so back away from keyboard/return to child-care
perhaps on AHH.com you win/where realness is hated
As fakeness, like yours, is highly-celebrated
your foolish blood...see you when the tape drops...if it ever does -
Thought i did ride the beat being that i hit every snap on it... I guess it's more than being one with the beat...
Honestly, you were the weakest part of the track. No hate, but it woulda been better w/o you -
I thought you did a good job your flow was good, lyrics were average.
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Thought i did ride the beat being that i hit every snap on it... I guess it's more than being one with the beat...
Im impressed, this is the best one that you posted so far.
The mixing and levels sound alot better than the others
the first cat came nice....wasnt feeling the second cat
the levels were off and uneven on the second verse too
they started your fade-out too early on your verse
the lows need to be brought up too.
Im not nit-picking I know its a rough-draft, and the mixing issues aside its a cool track.
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I love your voice and your flow but they put the wrong effects on your voice, you will sound better with just a little delay and some layered vocals and ad-libs.
Keep doing what you do, I can see the improvement.
*Salutes the "General"*
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? a OPINION Gen,Do Your Best To Drop Classics,If the verses ain't tearing the beat apart then throw it in the trash and start over..THINK CLASSIC!!..ALI PROGRAMMED HIMSELF TO BE THE GREATEST BEFORE EVERY FIGHT..Its how you think and how you apply yourself
I'm laughing on the inside because these Haters really think I ain't got no Heat..Wait til I drop My New Music and its correctly mixed and mastered..Awwww Man -
But im not angry... I'm a very happy person... My Life is great i cant channel something thats not there...
Think Of One Of a person who told you your ? wack when you write or spit into the mic..I close my eyes in a dark room when I spit,I find out it channels your energy more,sorta like a meditation with the beat ..Think of that person that told you,you ain't gonna amount to ? .. -
Alright i'll try that...
I also realize when you have memorized the verse,it comes out more fluid because you're not trying to read the verse and stay on beat at the same time..Your Power Of Focus Increase When You Concentrate your mind on One Thing at a time instead of trying to multi task...You'll deliver the verse with more passion when you have imbedded it in your mind..It becomes second nature -
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gen again is da mixtape cover da only pik we get 2 c lol??
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I answered this1 too many times
huh plz refresh my memory cuz i dont rememba wat u said lol.... -
Here's something i made, the mix is meh cause of the reverb ont he song...but the beat is straight [i did the beat too]
any advice would be cool
http://www.zshare.net/audio/799792873e6e3dee/
["in and out"] -
its str8, kinda reminds me of big sean a lil too much tho..
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maybe it's cause im from the d...the flow was slow in order to ride the beat, thanks though
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Chalee_Boi wrote: »Watts
http://www.hotnewhiphop.com/WattstheFuture/profile/
Sins of the Present (my personal favorite): http://www.zshare.net/audio/802369476e2ec4c9/
Stain Glass: http://www.zshare.net/audio/80239236c1c29498/
Success: http://www.hotnewhiphop.com/en/play/s/d89a991-59893/
Yeah.. Sins of the Present is Hot.... -
G.R.I.P. Money $$$ wrote: »aight here goes nathin..
check dis out..
Intro(Talk To Em)
02 Track 2.wav
Turn It Up(Can U Hear Me Now)
http://www.zshare.net/audio/80243785f711c0d6/
Catch Up feat. J. Flagg & Golden Boi
http://www.zshare.net/audio/80243838a700acbe/
Talk to em- kinda basic wasnt really feeling this one
Can you hear me Now- Very catchy, good beat nice flow on the track...
Catch Up- Its cool, not a bad track...
You kool GRIP Money.. You remind me of a St. Louis/Mid West style... -
heres some songs I've done
all of those songs are featured on my new tape "808s & Smoke Breaks"
heres the link to the tape
http://www.datpiff.com/BRIAN_B_808s_And_Smoke_Breaks.m148909.html
You remidn me on some Devin the Dude type ? ... real rap the Beats are fire son, but the hooks are basic and some lyricism is lacking... keep producing that fiyah tho!! good ? -
Here's a song I did with my homie Darryl J and MG, the order's Darryl J, Me, then MG
Darryl J, D Burns, Me -
I'm THAT guy... wrote: »
OUTTA HERE ... GOOD BEAT.. NIC TRACK OVERALL...
Ready ... thats cool as well.
Your not bad at all dawg but some of the punchlines are generic and your rhyme structure is a little basic... but overall its cool -
texas_da_king88 wrote: »
concepts are cool..lyrics not bad.. But the equipment yall using is terrible... If yall get better recording production.. It'll be alot better -
I started rapping on Monday, in honor of pac's death. but ? idk how to record except on my iphone smh -_-
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I'm THAT guy... wrote: »
Here's a song I did with my homie Darryl J and MG, the order's Darryl J, Me, then MG
Honestly, i thought you had the best verse on the song ..
Kinda went overboard on the punclines, tho -
Track I did last night and mixed today "Break my heart"
http://www.zshare.net/audio/8048211453482748/
I used the instrumental "break my heart" by Common as well -
LOCH DRAKE AND LIL WAYNE MISS ME FREESTYLE FOR @XXLStaff
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Why arent you guys posting your audios in the roc the mic section if u are actualy looking for feedback....thas what its made for
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=A0I3AFw6XNY
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VJVgAXYDRMI
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0pd4a_35afk
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=M2pkqMKyzi8