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  • thedesolateone
    thedesolateone Members Posts: 4,526 ✭✭✭✭
    edited March 2011
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    cause wreckages
    construct poetry on mountaintops
    flood you with flows out the aqueduct
    return of the massacre
    beat emcees black and blue like Zoe from avatar
    cookin sucker mc casserole
    focused as aderol im a mananimal
    kept notebooks wrapped in guaze
    cause its the sickest catalog
    thats brung down so called battlegods
    leave em dead in a sec forget a pencil
    put lead cartridges in a tech
    remove your head from your neck
    is how i leave you on my doorstep
    i know i bother you like death processes
    when i ? life like oil spill messes
    these are drills in suicide skill sessions
  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited March 2011
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    My verse is strong sematary yo lines is pet sematary
    My bars are more human than yo verse momentary
    Besides my mistake, you probly selfish like monetary
    When I tell you no good, u got caught like monastery
    Its like nation, yo rhymes a natural disaster, you battling is uncessary
    Yo evil can't see it like nebulous, yo power visualize its..like observatory..
  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited March 2011
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    Battling that guy
    Was mess of an observation
    Had one of bars laughing like worst conversations
    The guy try to obeject lesson, but couldn't obligate any obligation
    The crowd is rocking new goggles, dudes raps rejection of his objection
    Its was proven, his flow was slow like obese, if it worsen its a obliteration
    Winning a match is yo opticla illusion, some says I should quit rappin
    I'm not a rapper, I'm just an artist, who deliver images to give you hallucinations..
  • deaththreats
    deaththreats Members Posts: 1,602 ✭✭
    edited March 2011
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    sniperk wrote: »
    Now THIS was a dope verse.

    Nice flow, nice imagery... feeling the G.I. Joe drops...

    Preciate the shoutout sniperk...you go hard yourself, keep doing ya thang, hopefully I avoid you in that tourney..
  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited March 2011
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    I'm back like rude news
    Destroying all m.c's feelings
    Yo verse hefty bag, put that ish back in trash
    Swelling eye, my bars gave that verse upper cut
    Quick flash, killing lines, yo quick trash
    Back in trash, hefty bag, quick flash
    Battle rhymes, destroying you wacks...
  • maxseveneight
    maxseveneight Members Posts: 41
    edited March 2011
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    battle cats like kringer
    half step you get injured
    max get up in ya
    wack mcs for dinner
    read to blow
    you already know
    the sick flow
    i plan to leave a mark in hip hop
    like im ? in snow
    you terrible
    im astronomical
    bombing you
    with nuclear rhymes
    lryical coup take over you
    and your mic tool
    put away your gun
    you dont wanna duel
    im too cool
  • thedesolateone
    thedesolateone Members Posts: 4,526 ✭✭✭✭
    edited March 2011
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    mind readin ? searchin for ? charlie sheen quoted
    clip loaded with heat seekin explosives
    let ? smell me with wrinkled noses
    censors detect motions i dont quit
    like im drinkin to get sober send youngsters to get soda
    so quit boastin shrapnel surprises similar to rick rollin
    im off the patch so i rub widows ? get there twit ? foamin for kicks
    read my almanac then pray to ghengis khan readyin for mortal kombat
    bring long gats strong enough to bust through armor hats
    that will snipe you from longer distances
    than when eli manning arms snap if you possible survive the rocket launch attack
  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited March 2011
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    Yo cranial nerves is no match
    To my patients covert reinforcement
    Its covert sensitization, yo lines don't attack
    Yo concepts are ? get crisis intervention
    When you hear yo wack self on radio its counterirritation
    Hearing yo voice is like 10 million dollar fine, its pain like correction
    Quit yo audio or get fed by alligators, and understand yo life of derision..
  • deaththreats
    deaththreats Members Posts: 1,602 ✭✭
    edited March 2011
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    Man I does this rap thang wit ease
    and when it comes to this paper..Ya'll want that Jay Z cheese
    But yall lactose intolerant
    a ? want beef i bring the funk like parliment
    and when it comes to beef, i take me a seat
    and I eat like Charles Barkley ?
    plus im a master wit a blade,
    so I pull out the knife and line you up like Steve Harvey ?
  • thedesolateone
    thedesolateone Members Posts: 4,526 ✭✭✭✭
    edited March 2011
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    emcees throw in towels
    when i spit flem out
    im sick still should of been out
    me being in the league of commercials ? is an insult
    murder a cappellas ? and ? on instrumentals
    after i capture the first five votes then pout
    rappers fallback
    when i take the pen out or type lyrics that they soon wanna print out
    i can tell by the non-verbal clues they send out
    these ? should of been doused
    i light fires
    flame tires
    aim higher
    yet my duty is to please booties
    put the shaft in cuties apple bottoms to make apple cider
    be careful by the the rapper who spits rapid fire
    more rymes than drug sales im the best supplier
    number one compared to the rest of writers
  • shawnbrown
    shawnbrown Members Posts: 2,256
    edited March 2011
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    hopefully this ? will make it yo
    I wont be good till Im in a coup the color that them crip ? hate the most
    six figures that'll make it work
    throw a candle on top of the money that's cake to blow
    im supposed to be fryin these ? with the flames i throw
    but I'm coachin these minor league ? with the major flow
    you can catch me in a benz ridin by you lames
    with a ? ridin shotgun that give rocket science brain
    I gotta lot of game
    but I dont spit it to hoes I prefer to show em the diamonds in the watch and chain
    see I can bang with the best of you
    ? my aim is impeccable
    I keep the thang by the ?
    I'll run up on you while ya dame sittin next to you
    put the tech to you
    and blow ya brains in ya lexus coup
    I'm guessin you
    gone be the reason why the doctor sayin... "pull the plug, he aint a thang but a vegetable"
  • shawnbrown
    shawnbrown Members Posts: 2,256
    edited March 2011
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    oh ? .. i didnt realize that this thread was a joke
  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited March 2011
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    shawnbrown wrote: »
    oh ? .. i didnt realize that this thread was a joke

    Listen you joke this thread anit no joke


    But hear me out,
    Yo rhymes don't count
    Yo verse too reduce
    You quick to lose
    Like pounds
    Like Billy Banks
    Program
    Or Jenny Creg
    My wordplay,
    Make yo girl get wet
    Like Snoop dog video
    With miltary frustration
    Check out yo articulation
    Is example of artifical respirtation
    The flow stops like asphyxiation
    Bring you back like no aspiration
    Something of no ascension
    Similar as aspersion
    Yo text asinine, asperity
    How you can't match my rhymes
    You get ate up like asparagus
    On day of jurisdiction
    Your comebacks no karate
    Juvenile delinquent with no intestines
    Yo verse won't grow like no germination..
  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited March 2011
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    Punchlines still swing like
    Cotto's left, so yo lines needs to rest
    Its no motion picture, motorcade
    Leave the crowds in impress
    You to mumbling, quit the mumur test
    Work on yo muscular dystrophy
    I defeat yo lines like a musketeer, I left you wrecked..
  • thedesolateone
    thedesolateone Members Posts: 4,526 ✭✭✭✭
    edited March 2011
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    my veins hooked to IV's
    my minds a minefield im sick not insane
    pause as i gaze through the window pane
    aim and drop atomic bombs from my mental plane
    first oppurtunity im ?
    on 2ply tissue i read raps written
    start to spark thoughts in your cerebral
    ya skins being devoured by a brood of beatles
    from the zenith of zion zig-zigzaggin on some zebras
    place a zylophone inside of your keister
    how ? your knees are
    when you search for a straw of hay
    in a stack of needles
    inside pandoras box I hide eggs for easter
    cant be judged i dont even obey gravity
    have mares of escaping death narrowly
    so day by day i live hourly
    alot of it on the toilet seat
    producin ? art thats displayed in galleries
  • thedesolateone
    thedesolateone Members Posts: 4,526 ✭✭✭✭
    edited March 2011
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    medical professionals say these rhymes are indigestible
    therefore not edible
    strait anarchy theres no precedence
    just a caucus floatin in plankton
    you dont get the fifth element
    leave no fingerprint evidence
    stead drink guinness and brake records due to mariwana medicine
    cigars i twist study the stars
    parked in a fast car on a cliff tokin a spliff
    overlooking the valley
    not an emcee could style on me
    left them buried in alleys from boston to cali
    flyin out the aviary droppin bombs like leaflets
    fly cat like aviator heathcliff
    shred kevlar and teflon went i blast weapons
    hit with sparks of hells embers when my heat spit
    cant dodge me by duckin i cause mass destruction
    now i got a question for you:what the ? were you drinkin
    give spankins son you
    leave you stankin for two franklins
    have you driftin off like leroy jenkins
  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited March 2011
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    Wire tap, hear you weak sound
    Yo raps are tasty as cheese calzone
    Get ate up really quick, yo flows no wisdom
    Everyone is kinda battling, but you no compitation
    Even if you was, commerical raps already found
    Yours new underground raps sound the same its old
    Lines , you'll even will find it lost in found, biting
    No neurotic..so lower that tone, find another way pick up yo sound..
  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited March 2011
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    Battler rap master, leave m.c's in disaster
    Super doctor, they get envy, when I type blaster
    I thanks fors those masters, but defeated these laughters
    Makes these matches excited, watch you lose faster
    Then get intelectual, newscaster discusses pallor palpitation
    His roster rhymes get found buried as paleontology rapper
    Come rough as sandpaper, lyrics are sardonic shown simulator
    Singularly skepitical yo bars simpistic not a attacker, finish you as signature.
  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited March 2011
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    They trying dissmiss my raps
    My bars are too basic, n you say what
    Okay you can rap for awhile
    After the show, you'll be loving my raps
    I just don't get it, when you get dissed
    You'll say I for get it, a simplistic rap
    Diss yo weak career, come on I don't
    Mean to be mean, yo for get that..
    The lines are the firm, yo part fire trap
    The flow of comparing is firestorm, sounds traped
    But its okay get ate up this flap jack
    Fulcrum good rhymes, fugitive, you couldn't come futuristic
    Even the raps was fuzzy logic, futurist beats, you slack
    Good gesture, good protection, yours gesticulate is wack
    But we know you can do better, the tracks are not a gerund tracks...
  • thedesolateone
    thedesolateone Members Posts: 4,526 ✭✭✭✭
    edited March 2011
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    in the crowd that they called my competition i felt alone
    inside my dome were megaphone poems
    i could be heard above all others careful not to stutter
    i invited them all to be slaughtered and smothered with hot mustard
    i get ? hosed off by wealthy broads
    aim ? on implants,facelifts and nose jobs
    the wordplay slays in many ways
    while you get played and ? upon at your dismay
    sun tzu tactics,machavellian machinations
    my bloodlust is never sated and coincides with menstruations
  • Tupacfan
    Tupacfan Members, Moderators Posts: 2,428 Regulator
    edited March 2011
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    ya'll should throw some titles to rap about, maybe we create records like rap-a-lot.
    The mind's been clouded, so I come here and spit aloud,
    built for tough like ford I with stand thru all the ruff,
    the poems i write ain't even enough, so i stay smoking and puff.......
  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited March 2011
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    Quit the family jokes
    They too lame, what they wrote
    Have a habit murking those dorks
    Watch yo steps get yo hands off me
    You don't know me, I got verses that
    Will leave you broke, choke, no audio spoke
    Too much fighting in club, always wrestling
    What hugs?..I got this guy in a head lock
    No escaping this enjoy the nuts like Beatnuts
    I know some lines are getting old, did you listen
    To yours, sorry baby you not a rock star, I just school
    Them, have my hungery m.c's eat them like pop-tarts
    Shut up with the rumors, everyone can rap
    You wack so what, now people give me some space
    Intramural punishing students, you get intransigent
    Stanza intransitive, Bison enter you intravenous as cake
    Filling acids making yo body slim, throw you in the lake
    Rake you back to land do introspection no intrepid got baked
    Basically you got no intrigue, its ironic. I isolate what you can't take
    You not cool as frozen lake.....
  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited March 2011
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    Yo don't get it confuse
    Got my bars, you will lose it
    Straight sports style, always winning it
    Ufc fighting belt, one knock out, black eye
    Those dudes forfit, we rocking the mic, so forit
    Kung fu, karate all those foot soldiers, respect a bunch of flying kicks....
  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited March 2011
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    My flow is remarkable, you couldn't test my flow
    Even if you new a pro
    They thought I was mentally ? , until I busted a flow
    Put all my cowards in the dumpster to let them know
    I still listen to Biggie and Pun, I bust my raps, yo raps won't flow
    If I lose I don't know, I'll come back harder, to let them know
    A learning disablity turning out giving fake m.c's enternal dyslexi'o...
  • thedesolateone
    thedesolateone Members Posts: 4,526 ✭✭✭✭
    edited March 2011
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    here is a title:1. earthquake rations
    2. the mariage of the sacred and forbidden
    or
    3.the wisdom of the ancient and moderns
    4.heart of sand
    i can come up with more if needed