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You type so hard, you get brain dead
Menke disease syndrome, yo raps are no brain freeze
Thread lyrical similar menix or meninges speak yo text wreck
Bread toast, red chips, read yo lyrics, menopause will leave you
Brain sweat, have bars leaving you thinking worse than Edward Sissorshands. -
check the steez
brotha please
cats running scared of me like their allergic of bees
or nervous like they lost their keys
check D's
wanna beat my flow i say no
stay chillin 10 below
my dogs super like krypto
sick like swallowing skoal tobacco
you must be wacko -
watch my evolution
360 degrees of revolution
when i step up brothas are shocked like electricution
your rhymes diluted
watered down
mines ice cold
like a dog off the chain
uncontrolled
lyrical justice i uphold
lock it down with no parole -
http://youtu.be/jOcUuufZh38 CLICK OR DIE SLO
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Look at yo artwork
Pretty wack and worthless
Every rhyme line time I type, you forfit
Church, search, lurch, what you worth, you get burn by tourch
Only time you can be call fire, wired, hire, your style retired, I put in work
While you get, tooken, shooken, leave lost like looking up in the clouds, get murked by a fork. -
? tryna rhyme but they aint checkin for the syllables
Catch me in the kitchen whippin raw and mixin' chemicals
Lines empirical, in the hood im street credible
Ridin 'round wit a ? that swear my meat edible
Finna blow, I'm tellin you
Dont think these is wolf tickets I'm sellin you
Cuz that's 187 when the Wesson blew
--Rigga -
your wesson blew but hit nathan
destroy your rap aspirations on some wes craven
this iron makes you to a maiden
rock and roll your dome and buried out in the country
tell her my nuts got more protein than meat if the ? hungry
you couldnt cook ramen noodles
your a bird but you aint cuckoo
187 yourself and lose your scruples -
thedesolateone wrote: »your wesson blew but hit nathan
destroy your rap dreams on some wes craven
this is the iron that turns you to a maiden
rock and roll your dome and buried out in the country
tell her my nuts got more protein than meat if the ? hungry
you couldnt cook ramen noodles
your a bird but you aint cuckoo
187 yourself and lose your scruples
Foolish child wanna battle me?
Chop off ya arms in the middle of the Pacific; now get to paddling
Ya ? on my ? I tell her get to saddling
Verbal casualties while I'm spittin factually
You on some fake ? but me I do it naturally
Wait, Actually
I even got goon's ready for dat Action, g
know some killaz that'll leave ya mouth foaming; lookin all raggedy
And ion even ? ; You can't ? ' faction me
--Rigga -
Foolish child wanna battle me?
Chop off ya arms in the middle of the Pacific; now get to paddling
Ya ? on my ? I tell her get to saddling
Verbal casualties while I'm spittin factually
You on some fake ? but me I do it naturally
Wait, Actually
I even got goon's ready for dat Action, g
know some killaz that'll leave ya mouth foaming; lookin all raggedy
And ion even ? ; You can't ? ' faction me
--Rigga
start off ok but you cant go the distance
im far out like 93 million miles away
and still blind your vision
ya need to practice more and stop being an actress who plays a ?
? -smack you with a blow that lay you on the floor
no ? let itzgravitational ? you raw
hee haw haw haw;you get it on may 4th
bar for bar i got four bars
that will make you think im from mars
for your comedy show ill give you applause
your really be among the stars -
thedesolateone wrote: »start off ok but you cant go the distance
im far out like 93 million miles away and still blind your vision
ya need to practice more and stop being an actress who plays a ?
? -smack you with a blow that lay you on the floor
no ? let itzgravitational ? you raw
hee haw haw haw;you get it on may 4th
bar for bar i got four bars
that will make you think im from mars
for your comedy show ill give you applause
your really be among the stars
Hold on, wait; I can't go the distance?
I'm bout to lap you up and the whole IC's the witness
You see I'm about business so fake ? can't feel this
But know I'm the realest; you got a fitted cap? I peel this
So don't ask why when they chant Rigga be's the realest
--Rigga -
Hold on, wait; I can't go the distance?
I'm bout to lap you up and the whole IC's the witness
You see I'm about business so fake ? can't feel this
But know I'm the realest; you got a fitted cap? I peel this
So don't ask why when they chant Rigga be's the realest
--Rigga
and rarely licenced burners bang
corny named rappers burn in flames
wack to measure grams nowadays to earn a name
not real just real dumb get a real job
or be a real ? a million ?
claim they the realest somebody's lying
more fiends than dealers who buy it somebody tries it
dead or in jail either way you get your behind lit
your just a cowardly ? crackhead liar that denies it
they cant feel ? cause ya cant spit
you got no aim im unplugged
get off the microphone i ? your speakers
giving you the beats if you amp it
leave you in sleepin bags dead tired
forget campin
rain of bullets break through walls,ceilings and roofs
fake ? are realer than you
asks your moms after i finish ? while youre in your room ?
i father you then son you but my real genes skipped a generation -
thedesolateone wrote: »corny named rappers burn in flames
wack to measure grams nowadays to earn a name
and rarely licenced burners bang
not real just real dumb get a real job
or be a real ? a million ?
claim they the realest somebody's lying
more fiends than dealers who buy it somebody tries it
dead or in jail either way you get your behind lit
your just a cowardly ? crackhead liar that denies it
they cant feel ? cause ya cant spit
you got no aim im unplugged
get off the microphone i ? your speakers
giving you the beats if you amp it
leave you in sleepin bags dead tired forget campin
Yo saw on some real ? how do you think I've been doing so far? I only started rapping in March 2010 so I personally think I'm pretty good considering the minimal time I've put into this in contrast to others. Here's a few more for ya.
Lames talk down on my name like it dont stay on they brain
But when I scream what they bang I'm 40 deep so what you claim?
Untamed, talkin white but you dont slang
Muzzle on mute but still you hear the nina rang
Insane, or rather blasphemy
Steppin to a ? you just another casualty
Emphatically, rippin out limbs
Hip-hop's MJ, catch me hangin on rims
All black ERRTHANG like my ? ' Tims.... yeah
--Rigga -
Yo saw on some real ? how do you think I've been doing so far? I only started rapping in March 2010 so I personally think I'm pretty good considering the minimal time I've put into this in contrast to others. Here's a few more for ya.
Lames talk down on my name like it dont stay on they brain
But when I scream what they bang I'm 40 deep so what you claim?
Untamed, talkin white but you dont slang
Muzzle on mute but still you hear the nina rang
Insane, or rather blasphemy
Steppin to a ? you just another casualty
Emphatically, rippin out limbs
Hip-hop's MJ, catch me hangin on rims
All black ERRTHANG like my ? ' Tims.... yeah
--Rigga
as long as you feel what youre doing just be sincere you know why its dope or not
mix all that black with blue
when i black on cue prepare to get snapped in two
each half a watered down version of you
or perhaps break this ? into a trinity
then your inner voices becomes enemies
spewin obscentities
more like the bill cartwright of the rap game
with your playing your whole team will turn on you
i claim myself ,no one to hide behind
spend my time mixin ether with cyanide
searchin out places that you can die inside -
As I dropp I've battled the crew
Its time for my fresh kicks stomp another crew
White/ red air max 95, then my brush throws y'all red and blue
Play out the cops show anthem song, cuz I've captured too
Many dorky, try to teach other how to rhymes
But oh well like yo family smells, leave you thru
Clueless clue, run you over with da cali train choo
Choo, while you play out whoop there it is, I cut you up
Give you a boo boo..
Then take y'all to school
Registry, future bars no regrets, you only win on April' Fools
Sit on a stool, watch the game, learn right field, I bat-tle like Homeruns
And you love to Suckerpunch, when you lose, its no movie
Its understandable hearing you out, it gets tucker on yo audio's video's and movies is no ruby
Really you no good, I'm Hot 97...you some static lack unity
Just imagin yo other lines, unpleasantly, schooly high, ? pride
You get smashed in a mess unorganized, my unparalled hooks took you and yall too school, like miltary school. -
Fresh outta class so ? I figured I'd drop a few
Quietly, like when the silencer go "pew pew"
No audio but if there's beef then I'll stir the stew
Murderin you with the manual that Slim Shady drew
Lyrical Manslaughter, wicked dreams of fiends that split ya spleen
I just oughta, visual curb stomp ya
Text hit ya like the sig sauer I will devour
Give ya gang a blood shower
Shake ya whole nation no twin towers
--Rigga
It's so easy.... -
Blazin rapeing these m.c worst than a ?
Lyrically leave you mentally ill worst than dying pateints
Bodies worst than ? in Germany, you can't no war Russians
Because my rhymes are hospital, there no survivng, its hell final destination
Your Conjectures are weak no match for my verbs, you herb with those weak word of conjugations. -
this is something I posted on FP like 10 mins ago directed at someone else but it could still fit here I guess
"Yuck, homie why your rhythm so choppy
Keepin' my name in ya mouth make the banger get cocky
Prob'ly, Leave ya slumped sloppy totin' the pumped shotty
Ask apoll0 cuz ? know how we be Rocky
Now top me, ? I coulda ended it there
Breathin heavy wantin me to stop like when you winded I care
Homie should beware the punchline, death certificate signed
Complexities in the mind flow fine, wine, wet intricate rhyme
right na I'm just stylin, no punches this time
Cuz if I threw a jab I'd smoke you like I do this pine
you bruised n' cryin, beggin me to stop
lil ? this just the start I ain't ever gon flop
It's so easy, I can't WAIT to get in the booth
Uncover the truth, expose the fake, YEAH IM GETTIN AT YOU!! (atchu)"
--Rigga -
this is something I posted on FP like 10 mins ago directed at someone else but it could still fit here I guess
"Yuck, homie why your rhythm so choppy
Keepin' my name in ya mouth make the banger get cocky
Prob'ly, Leave ya slumped sloppy totin' the pumped shotty
Ask apoll0 cuz ? know how we be Rocky
Now top me, ? I coulda ended it there
Breathin heavy wantin me to stop like when you winded I care
Homie should beware the punchline, death certificate signed
Complexities in the mind flow fine, wine, wet intricate rhyme
right na I'm just stylin, no punches this time
Cuz if I threw a jab I'd smoke you like I do this pine
you bruised n' cryin, beggin me to stop
lil ? this just the start I ain't ever gon flop
It's so easy, I can't WAIT to get in the booth
Uncover the truth, expose the fake, YEAH IM GETTIN AT YOU!! (atchu)"
--Rigga
you misinformed have you missin arms
so its easier for you to suck the ? of your drag queen christian moms
i can just sneeze and cough and beat you with ease
i snufff you in the mouth while your puffin trees
get blood on the blunt and pass around your disease
you cant smoke this lead ,this lead will smoke you
? your dreams of being a rap hopeful
my text is like a tech- 9 have your mama in the bed crying
you lyin in your casket like its bedtime
your lyrical gymnastics will get your neck broke
tryna skate uphill backwards like you ate acid?
for that ? you get tossed in lake placid
"Yuck, homie why your rhythm so choppy
Keepin' my name in ya mouth make the banger get cocky
Prob'ly, Leave ya slumped sloppy totin' the pumped shotty
Ask apoll0 cuz ? know how we be Rocky
Now top me, ? I coulda ended it there
Breathin heavy wantin me to stop like when you winded I care
^^^^this is good -
not as easy as you thoughtFresh outta class so ? I figured I'd drop a few
Quietly, like when the silencer go "pew pew"
No audio but if there's beef then I'll stir the stew
Murderin you with the manual that Slim Shady drew
Lyrical Manslaughter, wicked dreams of fiends that split ya spleen
I just oughta, visual curb stomp ya
Text hit ya like the sig sauer I will devour
Give ya gang a blood shower
Shake ya whole nation no twin towers
--Rigga
It's so easy....
not as easy as your moms crotch
not difficult to light you up like watts
do you write rhymes in chalk?
its not close to even
turn you to steam, lyrical weakling
you will get ate after your seasoned
this crazy ? will give you eighty bucks
to get off shadys nuts and ? munch lady luck -
thedesolateone wrote: »not as easy as you thought
not as easy as your moms crotch
not difficult to light you up like watts
do you write rhymes in chalk?
its not close to even
turn you to steam, lyrical weakling
you will get ate after your seasoned
this crazy ? will give you eighty bucks
to get off shadys nuts and ? munch lady luck
lol nice....here's another I wrote on FP, because someone responded before you guys did. If you respond before they do, then the IC can get a fresh verse and the FP can get the copy pasta.
Ayo, lines like that, you'll never get the weight off
Rhymes lacking potency and ya shots be way off
Play ball, Okay yall, look, tell me, am I lyin'?
If his verse was work, first tell me would you be buyin?
If he'd cut some for the low tell me would you be knivin?
Striving, thriving, and dying, just to creep up behind em'
smacked him wit' the iron Brain spill out the frame like a leak in a condom
I'm speakin in tundra...cold, left his body to mold
Haters mad thinking damn he so bold
Homie do as your told, stay in ya place I'll maim your face and leave your life to erode
Casket is closed....
--Rigga -
pen game insane
ink flows through my membrane
eat live octopus and salivate ink
when i think i spit on the notepad
look like a test of rorschach
answers to why im carryin the totebag
move like a loan shark with large ?
late payments get ligaments broke
biting and feeding an even bigger insult
if you owe have you in customs importin dope -
I don't know how these ? off m.c' keep themselfs ? off
Probly there cheesy comebacks, that neva hurts no one
Gotta tell them, keep yoself practicing worse then trainers
Maybe one day you'll sound better than a president who told you so
Geriatric yo lifestyle is germ, reason why I told you so
To keep us away what you trying be though
Your flow neva touched generations, until one of the co-workers
Told y'all to leave, you wasn't a rapper, one verse made you yell louder than Aerosmith,
Played out the grimey video from Noreaga at a general store, some wack rappers had to go. -
thedesolateone wrote: »pen game insane
ink flow through my membrane
eat live octopus and salivate ink
when i think i spit on the notepad
look like a test of rorschach
answers to why i carry in the totebag
move like a loan shark with large ?
late payments get ligaments broke
biting and feeding an even bigger insult
if you owe?
may have you in customs bringin in dope
lemme know whatcha think, i was battling some guy named "bludhoundz" on another forum which explains the PETA reference
Wait, what the ****... THAT's what you got?
That ? was softer than them O's that we cook in the ?
You look n get shot, you shook n get rocked
You froze up from the toes up you know what, gimmie ya watch
gimmie ya jewels we carry dem tools it do more than just bruise
pistol whip hips it do more than contuse
Channel 7 news 10 0 clock spot and the ? is blues'd
Break ya fingers in two so you know how Rigga do
chemical on the desk I call it table of elements
Cynical with the Wes when it breathe you inhalin' it
ex-felon ? , 2 to the nose so lemme know if you smellin' it
When I'm through they gon be missing you I'm on my David Guetta ?
**** up these bludhoundz betta call up PETA quick,
know who you messin wit, cuz with the ****in weapon *****
I'm rippin' through ya vest n ? ,
Whole squad packin', who the **** wanna test the clique?
We run the game y'all pressin quit
http://youtu.be/mWfiATXsc90
Stumbled a lil bit on the beat but aye, I just wanted you to get an idea of the flow. Everything after "we run the game y'all pressin quit" is just me freestyling off the top of the head for a lil bit, nothin' major.
oh yea and make sure you judge my rap voice too...I'm not a ? so be as harsh as you can as long as it's still constructive criticism. -
thedesolateone wrote: »you have a good ear for flow but stop rhymin just to rhyme try to separate yourself from other rappers and dont be cliche
rework the same verse over and over keep editing till its the best you can do reverse the order and find different and interesting ways to say things dont let time force you to make poor choices and keep searchin for rhymes dont just write the first thing that comes to your head if its not good enough a better idea or rhyme is just around the corner and even then keep searchin
content first rhyme and flow second
so it's ass? -
thedesolateone wrote: »no did you read my comments in where i quoted you too?reread my whole post
Oh my bad you shoulda bolded your comments but uhh thanks. I don't think I have enough patience to build a well scripted bettle verse though lol I eventually get tired of forcing my brain to think up synonyms, antonyms, hyperboles, etc...And when I take a break and come back I want to start something fresh, I RARELY ever go back to old ish I've written...I wish I could just force myself to write 1 masterpiece instead of 100 above-average submissions..it'd stand me out from the crowd im sure
