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  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited March 2011
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    You not hard as rock canyon
    Not even the candidate, quit trying
    Keep you mouth shut as canister
    As styling, your living is a cranker
    Get wilding, you cannibal Get murked
    By cannons, I'm strong I defeat yo canvas
    Yo comebacks cancelation, thankyou for
    Being a candid person, get lost, you losing..
  • Tupacfan
    Tupacfan Members, Moderators Posts: 2,428 Regulator
    edited March 2011
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    here is a title:1. earthquake rations
    2. the mariage of the sacred and forbidden
    or
    3.the wisdom of the ancient and moderns
    4.heart of sand
    i can come up with more if needed


    peace G, I'm gonna write to these titles you threw up.. thanks!
  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited March 2011
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    You can be def but def jam
    Couldn't sign you even if you scream
    Loud in your records still Loud couldn't
    Sign you, not only scarcastic,
    If I hate battling I might be hypocrite
    Feel the flu, you must be gymnastic
    How are you feeling the lines
    Arrows grafffiti words got you hysterics
    Hypnotherapy every stanza get hypnosis
    Effect hypnosis couldn't connect bright
    On my hypertext even if you hyperlink
    Tried scarcastic.
  • thedesolateone
    thedesolateone Members Posts: 4,526 ✭✭✭✭
    edited March 2011
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    tupacfan wrote: »
    peace G, I'm gonna write to these titles you threw up.. thanks!

    i like to see what you come up with
  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited March 2011
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    Still cool with mic
    I ment text, don't need to bite
    Love yal is not only the nices
    But most lyrically whot text
    Leave most m.c's wrecked
    Worser than train accidents
    My bar are so great call it
    The Great wall of china
    Strong brick bars
    In my text you always
    See, Great bars that eat m.c's
    Like lagsana...
  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited March 2011
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    Gedicht from a dichter
    Yo metas are not close
    To a clink, call me the attacker
    Batter at the cloistered
    While others hater
    Make a verse clone
    To yo verse eat it like
    Gator, clinician undertaker
    These patient to there home
    As a doctor, the rhyme monster
    You have so many weak verse sheets
    Get a clip, correct yo mistakes,
    While I snatch other verses like the Undertaker...
  • thedesolateone
    thedesolateone Members Posts: 4,526 ✭✭✭✭
    edited March 2011
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    ill enough to take on any pro
    kickin ass takin heads stuffin cranials
    searchin for an equal not findin any yo
    your aint worth a penny flows vs my many flows
    though bars are hot as oven racks
    im cool with mikes like arsenio
    curse you like witch coven raps
    with the sharpness from a downward swing of an axe
    these battle raps should be signed by miramax
    in cambridge, mass keep the money i amass
    thats never found by the irs or ever taxed
    please dont throw rocks
    i stay in houses made of glass
    car talks to me like im michael knight
    when im idle they say the whips like psyco mike
    im charlie sheenin in guns,clothes,hos,rides
    besides my family is winning at life
  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited March 2011
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    Good battle raps...thanks for battling rapping on this thread keep up the good skills..
  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited March 2011
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    Not tired typing battle raps
    Probly exciting I'm lead like nascar raps
    Speeding to win, clean as h20, yours sounds
    ? like gin, you miss while you attack
    Masthead when they lose, your power slacks
    You so fired up, I light you up like matchbox
    You not monumental, you embarrass of monument
    Its not on track, I turn you off like robot, and your career is a wrap...
  • thedesolateone
    thedesolateone Members Posts: 4,526 ✭✭✭✭
    edited March 2011
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    gamble with your life its not a casino
    put an end to your breath im so deadly
    flows are ready but forget typin in text
    put the pen to your neck like joe pesci
    my bars are training manuals on how to write
    theres trainin handles on your mic
    im ill so dont upset me i channel electricity
    leavin broken lights on open mic nights
    rakim told me how to leave smokin mics broken right
    how emcees say goodnight
    and go to sleep with no nightlites
  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited March 2011
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    Thought I was out of raps
    Its a self government snaps
    Taking these weakling to sidewalk
    Battling them like royal rumble
    And make a track, they'll forfit
    For being wack, while speed like race track
    Couldn't beat me, even if you drove a Ufo...
    So sucka stay back like dropouts with empty backbacks...
  • thedesolateone
    thedesolateone Members Posts: 4,526 ✭✭✭✭
    edited March 2011
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    shoot you or show you shotguns
    always ready to get it poppin like shoguns
    come around its like a gunshow
    im the modern day shogun that shot guns
    swords you cant kick, c4 you cant block ,the bullets you cant punch,
    cases cant be solved with matlock
    cause this money you cant touch
    reach for just one buck you will be buck shot
    keep the gun tucked to crush your corrupt thoughts
    on mushrooms like 1ups
  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited March 2011
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    Still a ? , let one my hoes
    ? you for free, that 200 hoes
    You get jumped, you'll get happy for free
    Lol, sorry I lyied, more demon on you
    You'll die for free, my bars ? wack m.cees
    For even trying, so forget what you
    Trying to say, I throw millions of gerenades
    And die with my army of death, watch you explodes
    Like mines, for free, sucka I'll already killed you..
  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited March 2011
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    ...inflexible in yo tragedy
    Informal study you guys on simple strategy
    Whether its a game or ingratiategy
    Never INfluenCe but inflationary while you suck
    Influx in talents while inhabit inhumanity, they lose intialy..
  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited March 2011
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    Yeah man, not bragging much
    Just battling with the raps
    They would rap, but I'll try not laugh..lol
    You moves are weaks,
    What you rap about, really stinks
    You movement career is ?
    They even told me, you was no challenger
    But a mentally challenger in raps.
    The face off is wack, what you adapt
    From others, you be down ring, call a wrap!
  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited April 2011
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    Phd fighter, still firing as lighter
    Cars importuner surrounded , you no typer
    You still wack, these simple bars, you can't get any tighter
    They talk too much, you have no wisedom, probly no fighter
    You soft like marshmellow, or your fighting style playdo, you won't get better
    If was sports, no one will sign you, you can try out for sports, you too fat, no clever
    When come to snacks, okay maybe a goaly, but you still slow, anyone can score, you not better
    Smash you with a Porshe, run you over, what ever weak raps you got, its horrible like bad football weather
    Not nice, you fruiter than taking a break on bench drinkining all the gatorade, you fat kid, you badnews, never clever
    You can't handel the pressure of the curve ball or football, your bodyweight will pass out, you too weak, you make your teammates
    Make there face redder, if you think of writing rhymes, you too wack, you'll probly a biter, or wack writer..
  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited April 2011
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    Can't pass the class
    Give you lyrics, that will hurt yo external ear
    Feel awful in class, yo external carotid arery no good as your exenteris
    Get on the exercise stress test, see you ain't winning or try exercise tolerance test
    Or learn the exfoliate, while exfloiation while disappearing in yo body, by biopsy
    Expendabel, yo medical you need more dental supplies, disposer, you not strong as exostosis
    Its extracorporeal how you getting dismiss, as extirpation, rhymes using extenison or oppposite
    Extraoral, what you got another wack video, or yo wack movies, your style proly extrasystole or opposite
    We don't know check yo external fixation device, your flows get remove as eviscerate, as you guys got no potential..
  • deaththreats
    deaththreats Members Posts: 1,602 ✭✭
    edited April 2011
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    love yal wrote: »
    Phd fighter, still firing as lighter
    Cars importuner surrounded , you no typer
    You still wack, these simple bars, you can't get any tighter
    They talk too much, you have no wisedom, probly no fighter
    You soft like marshmellow, or your fighting style playdo, you won't get better
    If was sports, no one will sign you, you can try out for sports, you too fat, no clever
    When come to snacks, okay maybe a goaly, but you still slow, anyone can score, you not better
    Smash you with a Porshe, run you over, what ever weak raps you got, its horrible like bad football weather
    Not nice, you fruiter than taking a break on bench drinkining all the gatorade, you fat kid, you badnews, never clever
    You can't handel the pressure of the curve ball or football, your bodyweight will pass out, you too weak, you make your teammates
    Make there face redder, if you think of writing rhymes, you too wack, you'll probly a biter, or wack writer..

    Really good stucture on this one..almost rhymed through the whole verse...
  • thedesolateone
    thedesolateone Members Posts: 4,526 ✭✭✭✭
    edited April 2011
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    rules of engagement ,no patients
    bomb hospitals right away
    no survivors
    firefights forget improvised explosion devices
    send in my sick deranged men to slaughter microphone laymans
    the mental rhyme caveman who discovered fire
    my reptilian brain began to utilize it
    lines come together like verizon creating horizons
    that turn rappers to ash to be blown away
    gravitate and consumed by helium and hydrogen
  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited April 2011
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    Really good stucture on this one..almost rhymed through the whole verse...

    Thanks for letting me know, most voters said I needed more rhymes most of my verses, but hows are my punchlines and multies? Are they strong and solid?
  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited April 2011
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    They ain't feeling style maybe because they ain't bright
    Speacially when they blowing themself out the mic
    They right what they heard about the flow
    Kills no patients, no dissing who flows, n blast mics
    The lyrics we adapt, have ill m.c's, they kiss there boy's Knights
    They couldn't destory, a thing, but embarressed themself saying they tight
    They probly bite more wood then a ? 's, how they still trying be bright
    Your wild safari is no wilding, once they hear raw of my boys speakers, y'all are not tight
    Your raps are not tight, you light weight, you drop out, you not bright, you can't slam dunk my height sight!
  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited April 2011
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    Lucky charm, Irish smoothie, you no celtics
    Late Saint Patricks day you no go green light you got pinched
    Cuz you no West, I still number 9 and Allen 20..still 2pt. Shot all yal verses
    Match you up in match, like Twisted Metal, make mind yo forget like dementia
    Have fans dip you in acid like salsa. I kick these simple raps, to you simple wacks
    Then I trick you like Shaq, pass a hot verse, and you still couldn't slam dunk like Ronde from Celtics.
  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited April 2011
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    Have my rhymes manslaughter you like killer in mansion
    Secerts verses place on mantel, bring that heat like mantelpieace
    Light like napkins, then disappear like what happenend?
    Institute your style to another level like instinct instill you still get the slapping
    Institution what you try instigate, and find yourself of instant replay of defeats, you slacking
    You mindnumbling, that text reader are bored, you get torn, my killing is natural born
    You sound like Korn, when my bars drop appeal hits like Nirvana, face it, you too basic like child porn.
    Poker face your games, poision ivy your series, leave you clueless dismissed, your kicklines were never attacking.
  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited April 2011
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    Step matches like Tim Mcgraw
    Or call me Grath Brooks, you no competition
    Like guitar match, even couldn't square dance
    After brawls of bars, leave your texture dumb
    I win like cards, uza pair b.c kicks, no ketchup
    Yo lines are no cars, get Rundown left you hiding
    Under a Rock.
  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited April 2011
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    Once the thermotherapy enters
    You and your third-degree burn won't last
    The third molar be so ? off, the body becomes
    Thoracic surgeon, its all in the mind, while y'all
    Take therapeutic drug monitoring, signature like therapeutic touch
    Your burns, yo pains vanish quickly once I start texting
    Like Alcohol pads, peroxide, my verse heals acne and huge pimples
    Scars any wound's, y'all try to give me, I'm something like therapeutic dose
    Or Dermatologist, my degree's destroy yo dermatomyositis, you no texting surgeon.