LE Tournament #3 - Predictions/? Talking Thread!!
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i aint no 2011 ass ? . on my mama, on B.O.S., on my kids u couldn't do ? on my block but what the folks let u do.u couldnt air out ? where im from on 66th and green and u couldnt air out ? where im out right now in nap. and u cant rap for ? neither u rhythm-less ass ? . like i said u on some front ? for non-chicago ? . bet u cant go up in cook county letting the phrases "im from fin-town" and "i'm a neutron" come out yo mouth on whateva deck u sitting on.. thoroughbreds like myself know better than that, joe. naw, lemme make it clear how far back i take it. we know better than that , chahlie knowutimtalmbout pussassnigguh?
u a silly ass ? bumpin gums, I can't even take you serious anyway you finna get knocked out the tourney, da ? .. -
u a silly ass ? bumpin gums, I can't even take you serious anyway you finna get knocked out the tourney, da ? ..
lol.....gtfoh -
Damn.... ? was turf talkin for real in this ?
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neither rubitch or golden ? would show up
once i ether c melendez i wont have any comp -
thedesolateone wrote: »neither rubitch or golden ? would show up
once i ether c melendez i wont have any comp
two words CAN'T WAIT*bart scott* -
i got a question....as far as text battles what the ? do yall define "flow" as? I be thinking its like poetic meter and rhyme structure but obviously that aint what everybody thinks it is as i see people get commended for having a "good flow" and the bars be choppy and mismatched as hell.....somebody hip me to this please..
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i got a question....as far as text battles what the ? do yall define "flow" as? I be thinking its like poetic meter and rhyme structure but obviously that aint what everybody thinks it is as i see people get commended for having a "good flow" and the bars be choppy and mismatched as hell.....somebody hip me to this please..
shouldn't it be the same as if you're reading the lyrics to a song?
like
"Sick sick dreams of picnic scenes, two kids, sixteen
with M-16's and ten clips each
And them ? reach through six kids each
And Slim gets blamed in Bill Clint's speech to fix these streets?"
well that's jus my opinion tho -
shouldn't it be the same as if you're reading the lyrics to a song?
like
"Sick sick dreams of picnic scenes, two kids, sixteen
with M-16's and ten clips each
And them ? reach through six kids each
And Slim gets blamed in Bill Clint's speech to fix these streets?"
well that's jus my opinion tho
And ? i see people saying flows good on here dont look or read ? like that. ? was cool tho..that u? -
And ? i see people saying flows good on here dont look or read ? like that. ? was cool tho..that u?
lol naw that's eminem -
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"Make ends they hate you, be broke girls won't date you
That's why I relate to, choke your ass 'til your face blue, make you
Open the safe too
No matter how you call it (how you call it)
This "bralick", alcoholic
Like his weed green'd out like his brick solid
Distribute to kids who, take heart like Valentine, drink Valentine, all the time
Slugs hit you chest tap the spine
Flat-line
Heard through the grapevine, you got ? foe times
Damn that three to nine, ? you up for real doe'
"Slink steal slow"
As you remorse we feel no"
is another example of flow that looks good in text, I think it lies in if they use punctuation so you'll know when to pause and you'll get the flow they were thinkin of -
judah mad cuz I'm flowin' but he can't grasp it...it's okay bruh my rhyme scheme is too complex for simple minds, that's why you not finna make it to battle me in the championship hahaha
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I have seen verses like yours and ones that look even more complex...I always have to read raw materals verses twice.i got a question....as far as text battles what the ? do yall define "flow" as? I be thinking its like poetic meter and rhyme structure but obviously that aint what everybody thinks it is as i see people get commended for having a "good flow" and the bars be choppy and mismatched as hell.....somebody hip me to this please..
Your verse was a similar structure but I got it in one read...the only reason I would say something against the style is
every line was "set up/punch, set up/punch" each bar wasn't random but there was something missing...IMO
I'll guess your gripe is with what I posted and you not seeing the reason for some comments...I would say my style is in between
what your looking for and a regular 123 like fazem's style if you read it the flow is there
I think there is three lines where the bar ends without rhyming with the first line and the off word ends up rhyming in the middle of the next line
the reason it looks mismatch...I feel u. I can't speak for others but, it's my style of writing and u don't like it...my bad -
Quick Question have any of you actually spit any of these verse you kats type on a audio track because the ? soulnd choppy and off flow for a lot of what I have read aloud no matter how I tried to read it...
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i got a question....as far as text battles what the ? do yall define "flow" as? I be thinking its like poetic meter and rhyme structure but obviously that aint what everybody thinks it is as i see people get commended for having a "good flow" and the bars be choppy and mismatched as hell.....somebody hip me to this please..
I know what you mean. Flow should not be considered in a text battle. But I think wording should. For example, someone should lose points for posting garbage like this:
Your mom is fat/
BC when I look at her, I notice her big legs, big stomach, three chins, but I don't notice her ankles or her neck, what's up with that?/~
^^ That's trash BC the lines are very uneven and lazily written.
Before the judges began to vote, I told them to concentrate on punches, creativity, metaphors and maybe 5% on multis but for the most part, I feel like they are knowledgeable enough to distinguish between a good verse and a great verse. Tell you what, if anyone gets a vote they don't understand or agree with, I can ask the voters to explain a little more. -
On that tip go ask those that judged in BCO VS Judah to explain what about the "Flow" they liked because the ? looked garbage from one of the people in that battle???raw-material_ahh wrote: »I know what you mean. Flow should not be considered in a text battle. But I think wording should. For example, someone should lose points for posting garbage like this:
Your mom is fat/
BC when I look at her, I notice her big legs, big stomach, three chins, but I don't notice her ankles or her neck, what's up with that?/~
^^ That's trash BC the lines are very uneven and lazily written.
Before the judges began to vote, I told them to concentrate on punches, creativity, metaphors and maybe 5% on multis but for the most part, I feel like they are knowledgeable enough to distinguish between a good verse and a great verse. Tell you what, if anyone gets a vote they don't understand or agree with, I can ask the voters to explain a little more. -
Fazeem Blackall wrote: »On that tip go ask those that judged in BCO VS Judah to explain what about the "Flow" they liked because the ? looked garbage from one of the people in that battle???
I will if b.c.o. and judah want me to since it's their battle. -
fazeem just cant accept the fact his bedroom-boom buddy got chewed...lmao chalk it up both of you ? goin nowhere fastttt
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raw-material_ahh wrote: »I know what you mean. Flow should not be considered in a text battle. But I think wording should. For example, someone should lose points for posting garbage like this:
Your mom is fat/
BC when I look at her, I notice her big legs, big stomach, three chins, but I don't notice her ankles or her neck, what's up with that?/~
^^ That's trash BC the lines are very uneven and lazily written.
Before the judges began to vote, I told them to concentrate on punches, creativity, metaphors and maybe 5% on multis but for the most part, I feel like they are knowledgeable enough to distinguish between a good verse and a great verse. Tell you what, if anyone gets a vote they don't understand or agree with, I can ask the voters to explain a little more.
lol if I had known that I wouldn't have tried to make mine flow so good -
I can understand why you would feel that given you write ? like you are tone death with no rhythm so ? makes sense you would root for other with your special lyrical impairments...fazeem just cant accept the fact his bedroom-boom buddy got chewed...lmao chalk it up both of you ? goin nowhere fasttttraw-material_ahh wrote: »I will if b.c.o. and judah want me to since it's their battle.
I get what you are saying but dif this they are judging all of our battles so if it is not sensible on 1 it makes sense that the same lack of logic will be used on others if clarity is not brought forth on what the ? they were talking about by flow. That said it will impact my future battles if they are allowed to continue to run on a messed up premise with no explanation on how they came to the flow conclusions they used to justify their votes in that battle... -
Fazeem Blackall wrote: »I can understand why you would feel that given you write ? like you are tone death with no rhythm so ? makes sense you would root for other with your special lyrical impairments...
I get what you are saying but dif this they are judging all of our battles so if it is not sensible on 1 it makes sense that the same lack of logic will be used on others if clarity is not brought forth on what the ? they were talking about by flow. That said it will impact my future battles if they are allowed to continue to run on a messed up premise with no explanation on how they came to the flow conclusions they used to justify their votes in that battle...
he mad.... -
Fazeem Blackall wrote: »I get what you are saying but dif this they are judging all of our battles so if it is not sensible on 1 it makes sense that the same lack of logic will be used on others if clarity is not brought forth on what the ? they were talking about by flow. That said it will impact my future battles if they are allowed to continue to run on a messed up premise with no explanation on how they came to the flow conclusions they used to justify their votes in that battle...
I'll talk to them a little more about judging future battles and whatnot. The 2nd round will be better. Also, there will be another tournament late summer, a few weeks after this one finishes and there will most likely be new judges. I might be a judge unless I win this tournament, then I will probably defend my crown. -
raw-material_ahh wrote: »I'll talk to them a little more about judging future battles and whatnot. The 2nd round will be better. Also, there will be another tournament late summer, a few weeks after this one finishes and there will most likely be new judges. I might be a judge unless I win this tournament, then I will probably defend my crown.
Oh don't worry buddy, you won't! -
Oh don't worry buddy, you won't!
LOL! GL on our rematch.
Just updated the bracket. I am making the threads now. We are going to have some crazy battles in round 2. With the exception of 1 or 2 people, I think anybody can win this whole thing. -
raw-material_ahh wrote: »I will if b.c.o. and judah want me to since it's their battle.
yeah im curious about this. where was the flow at?
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