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  • SallTlim
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    loch121 wrote: »
    "Loch Drake Trophies freestyle (CDQ) (MP3)" http://www.reverbnation.com/c./poni/272018229 … #music

    Real ? rap is certainly back bruh. "On them ? a roaches I should do some fumigation" the way you delivered that bar was ill. Dope freestyle overall

  • loch121
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  • loch121
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    SallTlim wrote: »
    loch121 wrote: »
    "Loch Drake Trophies freestyle (CDQ) (MP3)" http://www.reverbnation.com/c./poni/272018229 … #music

    Real ? rap is certainly back bruh. "On them ? a roaches I should do some fumigation" the way you delivered that bar was ill. Dope freestyle overall

    Thanks.
  • Cigarello Slim
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    loch121 wrote: »

    I like this one, the flow was mean, it was aggresive and there was some nice wordplay in there. Can't really find anything bad to say about it dope freestyle.

    Got a mixtape dropping on 4/20 it'll be short but definitely worth the listen. In the meantime check out this track...

  • loch121
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    loch121 wrote: »

    I like this one, the flow was mean, it was aggresive and there was some nice wordplay in there. Can't really find anything bad to say about it dope freestyle.

    Got a mixtape dropping on 4/20 it'll be short but definitely worth the listen. In the meantime check out this track...


    Appreciate it.I'm listening now

    Yeah this is grimey.I like this.

    beat cool too
  • Dewzer
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    well my vid/post got deleted, don't know why, didn't break a rule, but i guess mods will just be mods
  • 5th Letter
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    "every poster that posts their music has to listen and give a brief review of the most recent song posted. If you do not do this your post will be deleted."
  • Cigarello Slim
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    SallTlim wrote: »
    Artist from Bed Stuy here. This is my 1st single "Next To You" off my upcoming project "Spring Flings: The Ep" dropping Cinco De Mayo. I would love to hear feedback from you guys.

    -by-mj

    I always loved that sample since a youngin' so the intro had me interested especially with the skit. I like the theme and how you kept us in tune with what was going on, the hook was tight very smooth, the flow threw me off during the verses tho on some parts. Very solid ? tho. Is the whole mixtape gonna be about different experiences with flings? Cuz that would be ill to see how u flip that.

    So once again I've got this 4/20 mixtape droppin' this weekend until then here's another freestyle for your listening pleasure ? ......

  • mixtapedude
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    i like the videos
  • itzawraplike
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  • itzawraplike
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    TrueGodHS wrote: »
    Checked out that Surgery from Drogo, I'm feeling the beats, checking out Eyerone right now. New track here off Soul Revival 2 as well



    Eyerone- That One Time joint is going hard. I ? with it. The beat for Debt is my type of ? right there homie. ? with that and the 7Five too. You got some dope ass ? man.

    That "Authenic" joint is dope, nice beat, thoughtful lyrics and a steady flow. Good ? .

    Here goes a freestyle I did while playing Xbox with the homies.

    "The Execution Freestyle"



    Looking for feedback, 'preciate it.
    Excuse the quality we were ? and high out of our mind.

    I like this kinda music better as you sound like your from the 90s that influence will never leave the game.

  • Rum Middleton
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    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=siXbzlVkwuc






    OH MAN!! ITS HERE!! The moment I BEEN WAITIN FOR!! OFFICIAL MUSIC VIDEO TO BETTER O!!





  • PurelyDef
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    ^ Better mixing would improve the track tenfolds, but it's solid. I'm not crazy about the beat, the primary issue is the quality isn't quite up to par. Aside from that the songs dope - not a huge fan of the video though

    This is my 3rd ever live rap battle, I'm still working on improving but I could use some criticism. (PurelyDef - dude on the right)

    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=47gBTrlkme8
  • RedHanded
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    @_Menace_‌ That was dope bruh. I'm especially diggin that billy joel beat. Rhymes are on point to. Check out my grou The Hood Consultants
    <iframe width="100%" height="450" scrolling="no" frameborder="no" src="https://w.soundcloud.com/player/?url=https://api.soundcloud.com/tracks/143469070&amp;auto_play=false&amp;hide_related=false&amp;visual=true&quot;&gt;&lt;/iframe&gt;
  • RedHanded
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  • Peezy_Jenkins
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    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=siXbzlVkwuc






    OH MAN!! ITS HERE!! The moment I BEEN WAITIN FOR!! OFFICIAL MUSIC VIDEO TO BETTER O!!





    songs solid, video could use work tho, maybe a basketball themed vid would be better
  • RedHanded
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    @Cigarello Slim‌ That ? is dope man. you got some skillz. keep at it. Peep out my group
    https://soundcloud.com/the-hood-consultants/space-program
  • Louis Devinear
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    @RedHanded‌ that song is not good. The mix is off. The vocals are louder then the beat. The hook is absolutely unlistenable. Is this going to be marketed to like a stoner/hippie crowd. Also this is group correct? Well couldn't distinguish the difference btw the two.

    @menace you have good direction and great song vision, but there's always a but, you need to tighten up your bars. And expand your vocabulary. Not necessarily use bigger words but stronger words.

    @loch honestly I listened to the dreams joint. Gave it a few listens. You have bars. A strong cadence. Pretty decent delivery. But I don't like your voice. That's my only criticism for you

    @rummiddleton that track you posted needs work. The hook is out of place. And it sounds like your chasing the beat instead of letting it come to you. Keep at it though
    You have a great flow

    I hope I satisfied the criteria for posting in this thread @sion. Now without further ado I present to the Ill Community the first single off my upcoming debut.

    "What We Do"
    http://youtu.be/te70iXnC3rM

    Shout to @n.mcfly you got some ? bro.
  • qawshun
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    @RedHanded‌ that song is not good. The mix is off. The vocals are louder then the beat. The hook is absolutely unlistenable. Is this going to be marketed to like a stoner/hippie crowd. Also this is group correct? Well couldn't distinguish the difference btw the two.

    @menace you have good direction and great song vision, but there's always a but, you need to tighten up your bars. And expand your vocabulary. Not necessarily use bigger words but stronger words.

    @loch honestly I listened to the dreams joint. Gave it a few listens. You have bars. A strong cadence. Pretty decent delivery. But I don't like your voice. That's my only criticism for you

    @rummiddleton that track you posted needs work. The hook is out of place. And it sounds like your chasing the beat instead of letting it come to you. Keep at it though
    You have a great flow

    I hope I satisfied the criteria for posting in this thread @sion. Now without further ado I present to the Ill Community the first single off my upcoming debut.

    "What We Do"
    http://youtu.be/te70iXnC3rM

    Shout to @n.mcfly you got some ? bro.

    At first I thought it was gonna be on some typical south sounding ? but that flow switch up caught my interest. Keep me posted for when you drop. I still got slots open on my project. I wanna hear more to see if your sound fits one of my open joints. Anyway good ? my guy.
  • Louis Devinear
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    @n.mcfly thanks for the feedback bro. Same flows get redundant. But I got some more ? . And I'll definitely keep you posted.

    Check out this freestyle it won't be on the project
    http://youtu.be/TEzftgjqGMU

    Feedback is always welcomed.
  • loch121
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    Thinking about doing like a contest for the Afro American ? album cover. Let the supporters make covers and we'll pick the best

    if interested,hit me up for pics and details,but it's based on the movie American ? and there's plenty of pics of me on the net. just search Loch121,Lochofmceo, or Loch freestyle
  • Cigarello Slim
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    @n.mcfly thanks for the feedback bro. Same flows get redundant. But I got some more ? . And I'll definitely keep you posted.

    Check out this freestyle it won't be on the project
    http://youtu.be/TEzftgjqGMU

    Feedback is always welcomed.

    First off salute for rockin' the whole beat, thats a lost art, ? ain't got enough bars for that in 2014. I was feeling the confidence and ? talking on this one thats how you jack a beat just curious to hear ya other ? cuz alotta ? can free but sound different on originals. I like that wrestling scheme towards the end too, made me feel old tho lol. But solid joint, i almost had pull to my Yankee fit out, NY stand up.

    But i haven't been on here in a minute my hard drive crashed on me, but i put out a mixtape on 4/20 dedicated to weed, its culture and the highs & lows of well, getting high. I ain't expecting ya ? to bump the whole thing but its worth the listen and plus its only 11 tracks on there. So if you smoke like I do put it on, follow the instructions and get high. And if you don't burn well... put it on and drink some water or whatever y'all sober cats do lol.

    if you just wanna skim through it like most of these adhd ? on allhiphop the stand-out tracks are "Why" "Dank N Drank" & "Chippin' In"

    any views, feedback, criticism is welcomed. 'preciate it.

    Zl_AQAcO.jpeg



    http://www.datpiff.com/Biz-Billa-Loud-Mouth-mixtape.603035.html
  • loch121
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    @n.mcfly thanks for the feedback bro. Same flows get redundant. But I got some more ? . And I'll definitely keep you posted.

    Check out this freestyle it won't be on the project
    http://youtu.be/TEzftgjqGMU

    Feedback is always welcomed.

    First off salute for rockin' the whole beat, thats a lost art, ? ain't got enough bars for that in 2014. I was feeling the confidence and ? talking on this one thats how you jack a beat just curious to hear ya other ? cuz alotta ? can free but sound different on originals. I like that wrestling scheme towards the end too, made me feel old tho lol. But solid joint, i almost had pull to my Yankee fit out, NY stand up.

    But i haven't been on here in a minute my hard drive crashed on me, but i put out a mixtape on 4/20 dedicated to weed, its culture and the highs & lows of well, getting high. I ain't expecting ya ? to bump the whole thing but its worth the listen and plus its only 11 tracks on there. So if you smoke like I do put it on, follow the instructions and get high. And if you don't burn well... put it on and drink some water or whatever y'all sober cats do lol.

    if you just wanna skim through it like most of these adhd ? on allhiphop the stand-out tracks are "Why" "Dank N Drank" & "Chippin' In"

    any views, feedback, criticism is welcomed. 'preciate it.

    Zl_AQAcO.jpeg



    http://www.datpiff.com/Biz-Billa-Loud-Mouth-mixtape.603035.html

    Skimmed through the project.It was cool.Cool smoking music

    Has a real 90's college station vibe

    My only advise is to step the energy up on a few tracks,but the laid back style works for a weed project

  • loch121
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    I'm trying to get my videos in the Viacom system plus if you're an artist you may want to get an acct on here and I'll follow/friend you

    Check out Loch aka @Loch121 http://on.mtv.com/1tEmOEm via @MTVArtists
  • Cigarello Slim
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    loch121 wrote: »
    @n.mcfly thanks for the feedback bro. Same flows get redundant. But I got some more ? . And I'll definitely keep you posted.

    Check out this freestyle it won't be on the project
    http://youtu.be/TEzftgjqGMU

    Feedback is always welcomed.

    First off salute for rockin' the whole beat, thats a lost art, ? ain't got enough bars for that in 2014. I was feeling the confidence and ? talking on this one thats how you jack a beat just curious to hear ya other ? cuz alotta ? can free but sound different on originals. I like that wrestling scheme towards the end too, made me feel old tho lol. But solid joint, i almost had pull to my Yankee fit out, NY stand up.

    But i haven't been on here in a minute my hard drive crashed on me, but i put out a mixtape on 4/20 dedicated to weed, its culture and the highs & lows of well, getting high. I ain't expecting ya ? to bump the whole thing but its worth the listen and plus its only 11 tracks on there. So if you smoke like I do put it on, follow the instructions and get high. And if you don't burn well... put it on and drink some water or whatever y'all sober cats do lol.

    if you just wanna skim through it like most of these adhd ? on allhiphop the stand-out tracks are "Why" "Dank N Drank" & "Chippin' In"

    any views, feedback, criticism is welcomed. 'preciate it.

    Zl_AQAcO.jpeg



    http://www.datpiff.com/Biz-Billa-Loud-Mouth-mixtape.603035.html

    Skimmed through the project.It was cool.Cool smoking music

    Has a real 90's college station vibe

    My only advise is to step the energy up on a few tracks,but the laid back style works for a weed project

    word 'preciate the listen that's the main thing i've been hearing is bring more energy cuz dog the days leading up to that session(s) were hetic so i got little rest and of course i was blunted so my energy was drained on alot tracks, next time around its coming from the chest.
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