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I can dig the concept of "not mine", however, the mix could be better. Consider that I'm listening to it on my computer so I can't speak on how its sounds in a club or in my whip. Vocals don't seem to be melted into the track, I'm getting a "home studio" feel out of it mane. Moving and shakin out here with the big boys, if you're not already, I would suggest creating the track at the crib studio, and then sending the (track out) to a "pro" studio, and lacin the vocals there for the full mix and master.
I'm currently working with Reasons 7.0, pro tools, and IMAC, which gets very good sound in my opinion, but after I'm done with the track, I send the (track out) to an established spot, catch the flight and lace the final song there. I never attempt to do the whole run at the house (not sayin thats what you did, but it sounds like it).
With that said, enclosed is the instrumental for our latest release, "Learjets no Luggage", featuring ScottyAtl, StonetheButcha, CharlieWise, and myself. After you all taste the instrumental, I'll post the video. Over here at KingMadeMusic, we call it "PlayboyFresh whip music", not too much trap or club tracks from us. We're moving across all digital media, to include Amazon, iTunes, etc, not doing half bad. Its said you should promote a single for six to nine months, so its a fire and forget (about sales) right now, just straight promo and I'll check sells in a few months to see if I grabbed any supplemental income off of it. I just now started posting music to sound cloud as of a few days ago. Hope ya'll enjoy. One.
This was my response to pre k. Sliding back through to post the video as promised. Website is down at the moment for a redesign, however, you can still come through and drop your email on our mailing list as we'll be giving away a free track shortly with a contest to see who laces it the coldest for a prize (not determined yet) and free promotion of the song for whoever catches number 1 over the beat.
It'll do for now, but the vision was wayyy bigger than what I had time to do. I'm currently in the military and only could take a few days leave to get back to the old stompin grounds off E116th to shoot then I had to bounce. I wanted some bar scenes along with some downtown scenes and more whip time, its all good tho. Don't forget to slide thru to KingMadeMusic.com and drop them emails my Gs for the first track on me. One.
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https://w.soundcloud.com/player/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fapi.soundcloud.com%2Ftracks%2F181328028&auto_play=false&show_artwork=true&visual=true&origin=twitter
New group track, those who bumped da past team DAR mixtape, we'd appreciate da listen for dis track. Dis is gonna be om Apollo's album feedback will be appreciated -
So da song i posted earlier got deleted for wat reason? Lol
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BlackAX410 wrote: »So da song i posted earlier got deleted for wat reason? Lol
You didn't give feedback on a previous poster's song. -
5th Letter wrote: »BlackAX410 wrote: »So da song i posted earlier got deleted for wat reason? Lol
You didn't give feedback on a previous poster's song.
Im willing to do dat, u aint have to completely obliterate my post lol who has a song dat they want me to review? -
The last song that was posted.
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5th Letter wrote: »The last song that was posted.
Ard after i review dat can i get my post back or i gotta repost? -
BlackAX410 wrote: »5th Letter wrote: »The last song that was posted.
Ard after i review dat can i get my post back or i gotta repost?
I'll bring it back. -
I can dig the concept of "not mine", however, the mix could be better. Consider that I'm listening to it on my computer so I can't speak on how its sounds in a club or in my whip. Vocals don't seem to be melted into the track, I'm getting a "home studio" feel out of it mane. Moving and shakin out here with the big boys, if you're not already, I would suggest creating the track at the crib studio, and then sending the (track out) to a "pro" studio, and lacin the vocals there for the full mix and master.
I'm currently working with Reasons 7.0, pro tools, and IMAC, which gets very good sound in my opinion, but after I'm done with the track, I send the (track out) to an established spot, catch the flight and lace the final song there. I never attempt to do the whole run at the house (not sayin thats what you did, but it sounds like it).
With that said, enclosed is the instrumental for our latest release, "Learjets no Luggage", featuring ScottyAtl, StonetheButcha, CharlieWise, and myself. After you all taste the instrumental, I'll post the video. Over here at KingMadeMusic, we call it "PlayboyFresh whip music", not too much trap or club tracks from us. We're moving across all digital media, to include Amazon, iTunes, etc, not doing half bad. Its said you should promote a single for six to nine months, so its a fire and forget (about sales) right now, just straight promo and I'll check sells in a few months to see if I grabbed any supplemental income off of it. I just now started posting music to sound cloud as of a few days ago. Hope ya'll enjoy. One.
This was my response to pre k. Sliding back through to post the video as promised. Website is down at the moment for a redesign, however, you can still come through and drop your email on our mailing list as we'll be giving away a free track shortly with a contest to see who laces it the coldest for a prize (not determined yet) and free promotion of the song for whoever catches number 1 over the beat.
It'll do for now, but the vision was wayyy bigger than what I had time to do. I'm currently in the military and only could take a few days leave to get back to the old stompin grounds off E116th to shoot then I had to bounce. I wanted some bar scenes along with some downtown scenes and more whip time, its all good tho. Don't forget to slide thru to KingMadeMusic.com and drop them emails my Gs for the first track on me. One.http://youtu.be/vyAOS-A8APo
I like dis beat, everybody delivered a strong verse, wasnt a weak link on da song IMO. Got a real currren$y/ Devin the dude vibe from dis track, overall dope song to me -
@BlackAX410 dope beat and you definitely improved your flow. Your boys were decent too.
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thanx mane, im to da point where i dont even listen to da old music I recorded cuz im still trynna grow as an artist. im in a good space now i just wanna keep improving foreal, thanx for da listen nd feedback5th Letter wrote: »@BlackAX410 dope beat and you definitely improved your flow. Your boys were decent too.
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@BlackAX410 Firstly I like the beat mellow & chill, the flows went will with the laid back feel. The hook was dope too and the concept was something I think everyone can relate to on those cold days in a cold world. As far as the verses I like the honesty from everyone but the third verse stood out compared to the rest, solid track tho bro.
Here's something I cooked up a month or two back lemme know what y'all think.
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@BlackAX410 , I liked the beat, and the song was very chill. I can imagine myself listening to this late at night, and the sound effects you used at the end were very clever. Also, you mixed the beat and your voice properly so they don't over power each other. Keep it up
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Now this is a track I finished a few weeks ago, and it's my first single in over a year, so I'd like feedback:
http://goo.gl/pCJ2P7 -
Now this is a track I finished a few weeks ago, and it's my first single in over a year, so I'd like feedback:
http://goo.gl/pCJ2P7
I like the Dead Presidents sample but that's where it ends for me. You need to work on your flow and delivery, that was tough to listen to man. -
Now this is a track I finished a few weeks ago, and it's my first single in over a year, so I'd like feedback:
http://goo.gl/pCJ2P7
Yea I felt the beat with the "Dead Presidents" sample...You don't seem to be comfortable on the mic though, you need alot more repetition. I've heard alot worse lyrically though...Once you practice alot more "flow wise" you'll be ok...Also I think you need to find a style that would be easier to deliver your bars cuz it sounds like you're trying to spit like whoever your favorite artist is, as opposed to finding "you"...That's my honest opinion, keep workin at it man...
My new video that I just dropped...Check it out.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s52-IMlLeH0 -
Now this is a track I finished a few weeks ago, and it's my first single in over a year, so I'd like feedback:
http://goo.gl/pCJ2P7
Yea I felt the beat with the "Dead Presidents" sample...You don't seem to be comfortable on the mic though, you need alot more repetition. I've heard alot worse lyrically though...Once you practice alot more "flow wise" you'll be ok...Also I think you need to find a style that would be easier to deliver your bars cuz it sounds like you're trying to spit like whoever your favorite artist is, as opposed to finding "you"...That's my honest opinion, keep workin at it man...
My new video that I just dropped...Check it out.https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s52-IMlLeH0
This is pretty good. I like the quality of the video. You can spit as well. -
Good looks man.
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Now this is a track I finished a few weeks ago, and it's my first single in over a year, so I'd like feedback:
http://goo.gl/pCJ2P7
Yea I felt the beat with the "Dead Presidents" sample...You don't seem to be comfortable on the mic though, you need alot more repetition. I've heard alot worse lyrically though...Once you practice alot more "flow wise" you'll be ok...Also I think you need to find a style that would be easier to deliver your bars cuz it sounds like you're trying to spit like whoever your favorite artist is, as opposed to finding "you"...That's my honest opinion, keep workin at it man...
My new video that I just dropped...Check it out.https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s52-IMlLeH0
This was tight watching and listening made me wanna step my audio & visual level up with this music ? . Like I said song was straight got your flow down packed, stayed within the concept and hook blended in nice as well, dope ? .
Excuse the quality I'm working with random daw's right now...
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Cigarello Slim wrote: »Now this is a track I finished a few weeks ago, and it's my first single in over a year, so I'd like feedback:
http://goo.gl/pCJ2P7
Yea I felt the beat with the "Dead Presidents" sample...You don't seem to be comfortable on the mic though, you need alot more repetition. I've heard alot worse lyrically though...Once you practice alot more "flow wise" you'll be ok...Also I think you need to find a style that would be easier to deliver your bars cuz it sounds like you're trying to spit like whoever your favorite artist is, as opposed to finding "you"...That's my honest opinion, keep workin at it man...
My new video that I just dropped...Check it out.https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s52-IMlLeH0
This was tight watching and listening made me wanna step my audio & visual level up with this music ? . Like I said song was straight got your flow down packed, stayed within the concept and hook blended in nice as well, dope ? .
Excuse the quality I'm working with random daw's right now...
-by-mj-nichols
Your soundcloud link is broken so I couldn't hear your track.
I instead watched the previous entry, the CTK video. I liked it! But it was a bit complicated. I feel after seeing the ending I need to watch the whole thing again. Solid "my girl is down" track.
Here' s track I did on the cyber-punk tip called Metropolis:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sFBeO44vBhk
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Cigarello Slim wrote: »Now this is a track I finished a few weeks ago, and it's my first single in over a year, so I'd like feedback:
http://goo.gl/pCJ2P7
Yea I felt the beat with the "Dead Presidents" sample...You don't seem to be comfortable on the mic though, you need alot more repetition. I've heard alot worse lyrically though...Once you practice alot more "flow wise" you'll be ok...Also I think you need to find a style that would be easier to deliver your bars cuz it sounds like you're trying to spit like whoever your favorite artist is, as opposed to finding "you"...That's my honest opinion, keep workin at it man...
My new video that I just dropped...Check it out.https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s52-IMlLeH0
This was tight watching and listening made me wanna step my audio & visual level up with this music ? . Like I said song was straight got your flow down packed, stayed within the concept and hook blended in nice as well, dope ? .
Excuse the quality I'm working with random daw's right now...
-by-mj-nichols
thanks man. I appreciate the feedback. -
Cigarello Slim wrote: »Now this is a track I finished a few weeks ago, and it's my first single in over a year, so I'd like feedback:
http://goo.gl/pCJ2P7
Yea I felt the beat with the "Dead Presidents" sample...You don't seem to be comfortable on the mic though, you need alot more repetition. I've heard alot worse lyrically though...Once you practice alot more "flow wise" you'll be ok...Also I think you need to find a style that would be easier to deliver your bars cuz it sounds like you're trying to spit like whoever your favorite artist is, as opposed to finding "you"...That's my honest opinion, keep workin at it man...
My new video that I just dropped...Check it out.https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s52-IMlLeH0
This was tight watching and listening made me wanna step my audio & visual level up with this music ? . Like I said song was straight got your flow down packed, stayed within the concept and hook blended in nice as well, dope ? .
Excuse the quality I'm working with random daw's right now...
-by-mj-nichols
Your soundcloud link is broken so I couldn't hear your track. I instead watched the previous entry, the CTK video. I liked it! But it was a bit complicated. I feel after seeing the ending I need to watch the whole thing again. Solid "my girl is down" track.
Here' s track I did on the cyber-punk tip called Metropolis:https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sFBeO44vBhk
Basically, she's my wife and he's my best friend...When I see the hotel key fall out of his pocket in the beginning and see the same key in her purse, of course I automatically assume that she's cheating...However what I don't know is that they are both undercover cops and they're tryna bring me down because of all the criminalistic things they assume i'm doing...Which is why at the beginning he's asking me "when are you gonna tell her about "things" you're doing"..Basically tryna get me to talk....So at the end I go to the room expecting to catch them cheating and automatically shoot him when I see him, and then hesitate and shoot her as she shoots me....That's when I figured out who they really were when I walked over to the board with the alleged evidence. -
Cigarello Slim wrote: »Now this is a track I finished a few weeks ago, and it's my first single in over a year, so I'd like feedback:
http://goo.gl/pCJ2P7
Yea I felt the beat with the "Dead Presidents" sample...You don't seem to be comfortable on the mic though, you need alot more repetition. I've heard alot worse lyrically though...Once you practice alot more "flow wise" you'll be ok...Also I think you need to find a style that would be easier to deliver your bars cuz it sounds like you're trying to spit like whoever your favorite artist is, as opposed to finding "you"...That's my honest opinion, keep workin at it man...
My new video that I just dropped...Check it out.https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s52-IMlLeH0
This was tight watching and listening made me wanna step my audio & visual level up with this music ? . Like I said song was straight got your flow down packed, stayed within the concept and hook blended in nice as well, dope ? .
Excuse the quality I'm working with random daw's right now...
-by-mj-nichols
Your soundcloud link is broken so I couldn't hear your track. I instead watched the previous entry, the CTK video. I liked it! But it was a bit complicated. I feel after seeing the ending I need to watch the whole thing again. Solid "my girl is down" track.
Here' s track I did on the cyber-punk tip called Metropolis:https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sFBeO44vBhk
Fixed that link -by-mj-nichols
I wasn't crazy about the beat but you made up for that by having a decent flow. Alot of the sound effects were overlapping the lyrics in the verse so some lines went over my head but I did like the Metropolis concept. -
^Cigarillo, thats a smooth beat. Damn that's a smooth sick beat. Flow was on point on hook and verses. Got me calling round for some og ku..Real chill man. Overall quality production.
here's a sneak peak track i just did today
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@smp4life I thought your track was dope and I really love that synth bass line too. The song sounds like something that would fit a Sci-Fi soundtrack. My only thing is that the vocals could have set in the mix a bit higher but enjoyed it. Here's a remix I did to Katy Perry's This Is How We Do
https://m.soundcloud.com/instereo28/instereo-katy-perry-this-is-how-we-do-high-order-remix
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MAd8xpWsBxk
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