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  • dj pre-k
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    i can dig it

    tha percussion is tight and i could definitely hear some raps over tha track

    you lodt me when it went all dubstep-ish tho

    heres my new track

  • loch121
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    I have a new project dropping called Afro American ? where I'm dropping a song a week until I drop it as a whole. I would love get some support on the project.This is the 1st song I'm dropping called "Aristaraps", based on the Aristocrats joke.Thanks

    Loch "Aristaraps" http://www.reverbnation.com/q/5ln50w
  • 5th Letter
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    @loch121 review the previous song.
  • loch121
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    5th Letter wrote: »
    @loch121 review the previous song.

    Cool.Almost forgot rushing

    dj pre-k wrote: »
    i can dig it

    tha percussion is tight and i could definitely hear some raps over tha track

    you lodt me when it went all dubstep-ish tho

    heres my new track


    I like the beat.

    Got a real Rnb feel.Kinda reminds me of something Nelly would do.

    This isn't really for me.It's decent.It's on beat and has some type of melody.

    It's obviously made for cars and radio.it's not my style really honestly.

    I think the raps could be better.


  • loch121
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    @Cigarello Slim Yeah that track is nice.Reminds me of some Texas type ? .I ? with it.

  • loch121
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    edited March 2015
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    This is the 2nd song dropping from Loch's Afro American ? project.This is a song loosely based on the confession scene from American ? .
    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eYJRKf-OQqE


  • G.Avant
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    @loch that aristarap song is decent. I like the satire towards the industry. It's not really my type of production though.

    Here's a beat I finished like a few weeks ago that I could hear somebody like J. Cole on or something. Let me know what yall think.

    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Jeo3HK53rbk
  • RepUrCity
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    edited March 2015
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    @Gavant Nice track, like the groove and the change ups. Drum pattern was tight and went well with the groove.

    Here's a song off debut mixtape of an artist out of Texas I'm working with. Dre Austin...he's a problem.



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  • dj pre-k
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    edited March 2015
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    ^he can obviously rap, but hes stuck in being a lyrical stereotype of "now-a-days" rappers

    heres a track of mine
  • RepUrCity
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    edited March 2015
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    @dj pre-k if you're going to be negative in your commentary at least make sure your own sh%# is on point...everything about you is cliche...from tha ground up...here's one more for you..."These ? $ Ain't Got It" You should be able to relate...
    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JQ8rorFN5wU
  • 5th Letter
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    RepUrCity wrote: »
    @dj pre-k if you're going to be negative in your commentary at least make sure you're own sh%# is on point...everything about you is cliche...from tha ground up...here's one more for you..."These ? $ Ain't Got It" You should be able to relate...
    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JQ8rorFN5wU

    You're dope, good flow, good lyrics your song is mixed down properly as well. Keep grinding.
  • loch121
    loch121 Members Posts: 12,884 ✭✭✭✭✭
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    RepUrCity wrote: »
    @dj pre-k if you're going to be negative in your commentary at least make sure you're own sh%# is on point...everything about you is cliche...from tha ground up...here's one more for you..."These ? $ Ain't Got It" You should be able to relate...
    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JQ8rorFN5wU

    Yeah this song is dope.Keep grinding.i could see this rocking live.


    This is the 3rd song from my project Afro American ? called "Woke up".I'm putting my youtube and soundcloud so if you're on soundcloud follow me and I got you back.And on youtube,subscribe and I got you back,just let me know your youtube.I already follow a lot of ppl on here.


    https://soundcloud.com/loch-last-flip

    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dLBRlB5_yZw&feature=youtu.be
  • dj pre-k
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    edited April 2015
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    @RepUrCity dont get your feelings hurt over my opinion

    @loch121 if youre tryna go tha horrorcore story route i can dig it.

    personally it gets boring after a while, but the ending wasnt bad

    heres my newest ?


  • loch121
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    dj pre-k wrote: »
    @RepUrCity dont get your feelings hurt over my opinion

    @loch121 if youre tryna go tha horrorcore story route i can dig it.

    personally it gets boring after a while, but the ending wasnt bad

    heres my newest ?


    I always liked that sample.Nas used it.You could use a more energetic vocals,sharper lyrics and you should have left that Suge Knight punchline alone unless you was gonna really say something clever about that.

    Loch Afro American ? music video snippets.Follow my IG too




  • loch121
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    #Loch #AfroAmericanpsycho #music #video #snippet #3 Follow me on IG @Loch121
  • Cigarello Slim
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    edited April 2015
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    No new music to drop just a big up to @loch121 nice touch on the IG promos gotta get ya name out there some how. Any producers looking to shop beats hit the inbox.
  • loch121
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  • Cigarello Slim
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    loch121 wrote: »
    Loch Afro American ? Official Music video
    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Q2o3N7brDdw

    I've still gotta watch the video but that song is nuts just hearing it on SoundCloud today. I ain't gone hold you I, when I saw the title I thought you were gonna be on some weirdo black Eminem type ? but you stuck with the concept nicely and the multi's were mean good ? .

    I'm still working out the kinks in my home studio but here's a joint over a Max B cut.. all good & bad feedback welcomed thanks in advanced.

  • YoungRider
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    loch121 wrote: »
    Loch Afro American ? Official Music video
    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Q2o3N7brDdw

    I've still gotta watch the video but that song is nuts just hearing it on SoundCloud today. I ain't gone hold you I, when I saw the title I thought you were gonna be on some weirdo black Eminem type ? but you stuck with the concept nicely and the multi's were mean good ? .

    I'm still working out the kinks in my home studio but here's a joint over a Max B cut.. all good & bad feedback welcomed thanks in advanced.


    Was up bro I think you need some work on your mixing as you said but it is kind of a distraction when trying to zone out to the song. I like the overall feel of the tracks along with the lyrics and message. Keep working on your home quality because it sounds like you have some skill.

    check me out bro at https://soundcloud.com/tevrashard

    Lol i think i got it right this time if not will a mod please message me what I am doing wrong Thanks!
  • kzzl
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    YoungRider wrote: »
    loch121 wrote: »
    Loch Afro American ? Official Music video
    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Q2o3N7brDdw

    I've still gotta watch the video but that song is nuts just hearing it on SoundCloud today. I ain't gone hold you I, when I saw the title I thought you were gonna be on some weirdo black Eminem type ? but you stuck with the concept nicely and the multi's were mean good ? .

    I'm still working out the kinks in my home studio but here's a joint over a Max B cut.. all good & bad feedback welcomed thanks in advanced.


    Was up bro I think you need some work on your mixing as you said but it is kind of a distraction when trying to zone out to the song. I like the overall feel of the tracks along with the lyrics and message. Keep working on your home quality because it sounds like you have some skill.

    check me out bro at https://soundcloud.com/tevrashard

    Lol i think i got it right this time if not will a mod please message me what I am doing wrong Thanks!

    Mix on point. Sounds like it hits hard with some 15's. Flow on point. Rhymes on point. Beat is simple and carries the song enough. Is the "complex" a tag? If not, I'd get rid of it or not have it in the song so much.

    You did all the technical stuff right. Only thing you need to worry about is getting the right track to lace. You spitting hard as ? , so it's just a matter of getting the right song. The beat was simple like a said earlier, problem is you're not a simple rapper. You need something that's going as hard as you are. Conveys to the listener the same energy that you're performance is giving.


  • dj pre-k
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    it sounds good but i cant hear wtf ya sayin in tha beginning

    need to turn ya vocals way up n maybe lay off tha effects

    you got potential tho

    heres some ? i did


  • loch121
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    edited April 2015
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    loch121 wrote: »
    Loch Afro American ? Official Music video
    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Q2o3N7brDdw

    I've still gotta watch the video but that song is nuts just hearing it on SoundCloud today. I ain't gone hold you I, when I saw the title I thought you were gonna be on some weirdo black Eminem type ? but you stuck with the concept nicely and the multi's were mean good ? .

    I'm still working out the kinks in my home studio but here's a joint over a Max B cut.. all good & bad feedback welcomed thanks in advanced.


    Appreciate that.While I wouldn't run away from the Eminem comparison,I know that my voice is nothing like Em.I would never deny the influence that a bunch of MCs had on me.Plus when Em named his list of top 10,they basically were the same guys who influenced me,but I would have put Ras Kass in my list.I'm also originally from 8 Mile.

    The video is featured on a few sites if anybody wants to give comments or whatever.This other site uploaded it to their youtube,Blank TV.Any artists may want to send material to these sites also.

    Loch - "Afro American ? " Moverite Ent/MCEO Ft. on @BlankTVhttps://youtu.be/cUbAkv-25eA

    Loch Afro American ? (Official Music Video) http://gomusicstar.com/video/loch-afro-american-? -official-music-video/ …

    Loch Afro American ? (Official Music Video) -- http://www.grindofficial.com/videos/loch-afro-american-? -official-music-video …

    NEW VIDEO by Loch Afro American ? on Rising Hype (Official Music Video) http://bit.ly/1boQ8ub

    Loch Afro American ? on @Drop_music http://www.dropmusic.net/chart/afro-american-? / …
  • kzzl
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    dj pre-k wrote: »
    it sounds good but i cant hear wtf ya sayin in tha beginning

    need to turn ya vocals way up n maybe lay off tha effects

    you got potential tho

    heres some ? i did


    I'll try turning them up and hope that helps. Vocals are my biggest concern actually. With my accent and grammar, I want to be sure what I'm saying is getting out. Folks act like they can't understand me just when I'm talking to them.

    All of the stuff I'll be posting is just drafts. I plan on getting some stuff done now, then get it all redone professionally back home. I'm thinking being prepared somewhat is better than just going in with scratch. If there's anything I need to be aware of in the meantime y'all feel free to let me know.
  • dj pre-k
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    edited May 2015
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    since tha chain been broken ima post this again



    feedback?
  • GreenHatNicca
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    dj pre-k wrote: »
    since tha chain been broken ima post this again



    feedback?

    What's going on man I like this joint.it's something different.a laid back smooth joint with a message.Ima add you to my soundcloud and check out some more of your stuff.


    These are two tracks I did.they both are getting internet radio play at the moment

    Listen to B.B.S.(Bottle Girls Bartenders And Strippers) by AceDeuce #np on #SoundCloud


    This track is getting some spins in atl on myatlantaradio.com so for those who listen to that station on your phone apps feel free to call up n request it

    Listen to Mystery Lady Hip Hop Version by AceDeuce #np on #SoundCloud


    This track right here is getting spins on a few online radio stations.I'm gonna do a video for this soon
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