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  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited January 2011
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    Saturn in the ring, slam dunk from Davis
    Smooth cut, going for Clippers this year, my nba is famous
    Serious as Lakers strong as Knicks, my bars the greatest
    went from college, to pro freestyle like the playoffs good as important
    Forget what they tought about my last verse, I'm new construction
    Reading basketball cards, they learning my next player's information
    Ready for that bars of war, look good as ? of War, that verse Jordan..
  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited January 2011
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    Goodday who cares who saw it, and what they thought about it
    Not a rapper just artist who paints colors, I'm wack forget about it
    I love my family, Happy Birthday to my favorite Niece
    Thank ? for giving us a school to finish our education, tired of dissing
    There's not even another battler, nah just kidding, still learning how to dis
    Public school or private school, we still in class, that homework is not dissmiss
    Still headphone listing the newest mix from Clue to Cutmaster C
    Some are lying some is trying to see if you can be your own hottest mix cd
    ? is beauiful, the world wonders, loving is I know, lights, camra, cheese
    Happy Birthday to all the kids, have fun, keep the parents in peace..
  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited January 2011
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    No disrespect on any verse, I'm trying to see if I still got the skillz
    Its that love
    Forgive me baby
    The land is beauiful,
    What you say is wonderful
    You made me strong
    Love is powerful

    Hey love where have you been
    We don't even talk no more
    Made some of my books unclean
    write remake my verse clean
    Now scrubing, you back in the scene
    Making words, together we're a team
    Passing the galaxy, as a spaceship's dream
    Keeping it clean, back as a team
    Then leaves come around every three years
    Some luck, or love spirit
    I don't know what it is

    Its that love
    Forgive me baby
    The land is beauiful
    What you say is wonderful
    You made me strong
    Love is powerful...
  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited January 2011
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    What's not dropping is validity
    Best to come correct as reliabilty
    Not psychasthenia as success to good reality
    Flow can sometimes be impulsive, judge of study
    Masculine and aggressive, judge of personality
    Some what of factor analysis, but focus consistency
    Foundation to temperament as mansion of love to personality...
  • Tupacfan
    Tupacfan Members, Moderators Posts: 2,428 Regulator
    edited January 2011
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    Hey love yal,

    I see your growing.. I like that.. These last few freestyle verses u been dropping is actually up to par.. the multies is coming off nice.

    You keep it up, and I hope it furthers you into future battles..

    Peace..
  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited January 2011
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    Sorry its not late to say Happy Birthday
    Its your Birthday, to favorite Niece, Happy Birthday
    I keep freestyling until I the worlds happy
    Nothing ugly, make the world happy
    Cake, balloons, family dancing, singing Birthday happy
    Jokes, conversations, familiy feeling happy
    Happy Birthday, to favorite Niece, singing Happy Birthday
    Beautiful, parents happy, grandparents rest of family show her Happy Birthday....
  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited January 2011
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    Hey Tupacfan
    How's everything, thanks I been trying to get better, thanks for that battle, you have lots talents, creativty, on all your verses...battle you gave me experince to get better, thanks, good luck towards your next battle...good luck..
    tupacfan wrote: »
    Hey love yal,

    I see your growing.. I like that.. These last few freestyle verses u been dropping is actually up to par.. the multies is coming off nice.

    You keep it up, and I hope it furthers you into future battles..

    Peace..
  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited January 2011
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    What would you do, with out the freestyle
    I don't know, I just freestyle
    Go to the studio, make some songs, higher level
    Get your crew and friends, make tracks, incredible
    Be your own 9th Wonder holler the station like Doo ? n fellas
    N ladies, whole skool reppin where they from, wild out like NBA finals
    Chilling at import tuner, showing a carshow, style recycles
    Rims, engines, car clean, no hate, thanks to ? , and loving everyones styles...
  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited January 2011
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    X-Men 10 not in theather yet
    Behavioral statistics psychological
    X- Facter smashing as Wolvrine results
    Finding Doctoran secerts, Descriptive Statistics
    Before the attack, make dug deep leave it graphical statistics
    Not beetle jucie, Nightmare elm street, stlye horrfic
    Knifes 360 as tuners rims, any verse invades Pin Descriptive
    Ghostbuster 3 librarian studying psychology, positively correlated
    Scatter diagram appear to form line correlation, oppsite of positive
    74 reduce it to 70 times by 2, 140 hotter verse I got make win pedict
    Prediction of the making, while others analyzing open ended data, keep it particular...
  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited January 2011
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    Unforgivin, but forgive tha untouchable
    Disease prone personality anixious and hostile
    Getting 7 to 8 hours of sleep, forgive stress of high level
    Excess sun exposure if this verse is too hot, leave it not behavioral
    Forget the rumors, there ideas, but love them like reducing alcohol
    Good health, release stress as coping, if verse can't make, still get love though
    Music box church song, memories of dictatorship went good, keep ? love
    Dismissing poor judgments, study anxiety sign of emotional
    Take you somewhere speacial surpise like Cyrax, unpredictalble...
  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited January 2011
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    Information of mental of cogniton
    X-ray technician Sub-zero finisher motion
    creative personality valuing independence never introversion
    Farming there style like stack of album from stores affects the decision
    Foot locker vs champ sports, but can't keep up how we ? learning flow-on
    What's said rule of thumb, heuristic instead of functional solution
    Trial and error understanding, mechanical solution, as motor trends look in
    Low rider, ? your ride, have 4 time 3 12 hours car show, verse to adults act like childrens..
  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited January 2011
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    Internet beef I don't know what to do?
    Some one gave me a bobo
    So I decide to calm down
    Don't go koko
    Enjoy the stay, I'm sorry
    Still ride out rhymes like cho-cho
    For get those tears baby boo
    Play out an achieved role like Joe
    Meet Susie Sue call it role conflict at school
    Destructive behavior social roles by Zimbardo
    Member of degrees commited Phd cohesiveness group
    Emotions, action, love ? with belief attitudes are expressed through....
  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited January 2011
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    Too many cuties after the style
    I'm glad ? made my freestyle different
    Doesn't matter if you lose or wins, loves is wild
    This throne, are songs, life, education for the mind
    They try to diss, but I'm glad they miss, hot profile
    They say yal braggs to much, Only say thanks who made me love yal
    Big deal, if they better, too many tears, why ask who's the best?
    Wasn't for them they wouldn't be helicoper Bmw freestyle
    Thanks lord for giving us the power to love, forgive, and care
    Too many lines, too many good times, loving ? is a share...
  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited January 2011
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    Biofeedback voluntery regulation to another person's verse
    Separation of forgivness but maintaining old culture
    Accepting to new contact assimlation, not marginalization suffer
    Stranger in a strange land, acculturative stress, turn it what's worth
    Addressing values making miracles, member of minuteman fought pure
    Then became a doctor who owns it doctarn cured the sick never left Gods culture..
  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited January 2011
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    When I freestyle I hope is not delusion
    After feeling weak, I came strong like ? mission
    Me losing these battles, must be Hallucination
    Maybe I not rapper, but an artist that helps dementia,
    Too early for Alzheimer's, rhyming heals problems
    Not yal, helping those voices, lord struggling
    I try too watch the mouth, but this is not a video game
    It gets fun, don't want to get another verse leave you delusion
    Enjoy studying, use lines to fight for schizophrenia, make it fun rhyme
    No disrespecting, probly change rap n country into artwork How I'm flowing
    Can't diss my teachers, they probly hate weak lines, I'm cool that I'm learning
    Get lost in zone similar like rollercoaster just vibe that ride feel the paranoid emotion
    Like coming from ocean inside train holding to your seatbelt splash out to the sky, then land down on land with cheerful emotions....
  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited January 2011
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    I'm like check it baby what's the deal
    The freestyles you hear are old flava, I got skillz
    Who cares what they tell ya, My bars are frozen Ice chilled
    Left too many mc's frozen, I'm just too nice, don't call me ice ninja
    My lines are too Mike Jordan, slam dunkin verse on yal hater'az
    Who the best mc, who holds down like Grand Canayon, love yal
  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited January 2011
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    I'm like fresh cherry pies for the ladies
    Hot nascar ruff ryders for the felles
    I just freestyle waiting to deliver a combo hit
    There goes 1000 killer Instinct punchline hit
    When people see yal verse, undestructable
    Untouchable, no visual I control there minds, like Grinch
    My lines have them working out like miltary hate
    What ? them off my verse is way hotter, not fake
    There are weak once I shake there verse they fall apart
    They wish they were nasty, they try to play me like atri
    The atri is what's playing them, they just can't beat me, with these freestyle hard..
  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited January 2011
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    Doctarn class, please don't mess up my wips, cribs, hotels and my people
    My people are trying not to be evil
    Horrific flick, when they see those hungery mc
    Me people will eat them
    Lol sorry I'm probly kiding
    Rather then sinning
    I'm just making up jokes
    So people can like me
    What's the problem
    If my verse don't got the best looks
    Went from Filas to a Nike verse
    Or maybe not, atleast my skills are trying
    Not clowning, just fooling with lyrics
    To see if I can come better off the dome
    Not alone in the zone
    A crowd of sports fan
    Waiting Love yal turn to Hey Rudy
    Yup, I'm almost there like dissing cowards, I'm almost famous
    Not hater, but can be..nah just kidding
    Not hater in my blood for what
    That if I loose my way
    Lift heavy pounds if there beef right away
    Not fighter, but a lover when ? to be better
    Angles sidekick I listen ? before I make another mistake
    I fell in love when I found out I love to perfect my lyrics
    Draws them out to share world I wasn't crazy to be greedy
    But to love other lyrics learn from true playas, love ? serious..
  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited January 2011
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    Love is love
    Thanks to all
    Best time of all
    World oh world
    Life is like wow
    Music beautiful
    Gods great
    Plenty of church visitation
    Forgive what sometime I say
    Practice words, what not to say
    But love is love
    Love is all what I got to say..
  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited January 2011
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    Some feeling the flow, some are not
    Wasting some time to write someting hot
    Remarkable, practice untouchable
    Suppose be hearing new mixes, hearing likeable flow
    Starting a show, this ish is fun, you should try it, n grow
    Anyone can this if you try, rhyme for line, whoa
    Grab yours friends snatch them start a band go whoa
    This not my best, but becoming the best is the rest yo
    Yeah, grab your friends, this rap ish a hobby
    Enjoy writing, adapt to knowelge, school is popular
    Ask Bobby, if you got me, yeah friends, start up a band
    Freestyle, reggeaton, spit like Daddy Yankee or Linkin Park
    F that racises ish, imagn Eminem doing tracks with the Beatnuts
    Meatloaf making movies with Elton and Shaq, Jack Black plays as the new Batman
    Mobb deep did a track with Wisin Yandel, Dj Doo ? join the Nba
    Still hear making raps song with friends, take pill you already finish college
    Say some ish you never heard before, talk about the economy why is so hard to get jobs
    What's wrong with world, some young kids still doing drugs
    But a good freestyle will change there mind, give them hugs
    Let them pet some animal horses, take them to a field trip, touch up a pug
    Or for get what I said, why run out of rhymes, don't be scared what the other one said
    Who cares who did it or who start it, grab a mic, and sing, play the paino and think
    Just talk, get in the mood, say lots prayers, pray for those who sinning
    But keep singing, grab your friends, start up a band
    Make up songs, go to church, stay in school, that's the plan
    Be the man or women have kids, or take care of kids that the plan
    Yeah uh uh that's the plan...
  • deaththreats
    deaththreats Members Posts: 1,602 ✭✭
    edited January 2011
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    WOW...just getting some stuff off ya chest I see
  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited January 2011
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    Thanks I been practing, still trying to do better on verses...
  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited January 2011
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    Something to say
    I flow not to ill, but. I know its sick
    Bars hard as brick, some tch
    Who cares lol..that my start of freestyle
    Hearing haters all day, hearing there cryies all day
    Imagine you hear that around the way
    Give them hugs, love them, offer them flower
    Maybe write to them why are the way you are
    Why are you so mad, what did I do
    Ish, is it your bad day, can I cheer you up
    Hey do you like ? ..one day let's go to church
    We pray together, I be at there with million of family too
    The whole world listen to this flow, f hating no ish
    Yo still going to school waiting for my phd
    Yeah its expensive, my a lottery we get lucky
    You too can finish school, sorry for making you cry
    Don't cry, we all cry, forgive us, that karma sucks
    Yeah you talk that ish, that ish wants to eat you alive
    Yo I say f that move up, get back to school, step yo game up
    Its that playa don't won't to be played, to arguement like what
    King did to yal, yo I freestyle to live the moments, respect all ? families..one luv
  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited January 2011
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    Flow no garabage, sometime I just talk that trash
    To be that ish, sorry for the intro, I'm fast like flash
    Nascar driver, skill type writer, flow massacre
    Forgive me somtimes what I say, never ment to lose in arguements
    Complaining neva works, forgive the loud speech, never ment to happen
    Jealousy of disapointment of envy not graduating fast like suppose too
    Went through is mood depression, wasn't even my b-day, happy B-day
    Enjoy the time reminds good times with many families, after church flowin
    Thank good made it this flow last minute..
  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited January 2011
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    No hostility, flow brutality
    Neva give up, backpack Duracell
    Some take steriods, I'm naturally born
    Verse masculant, punchline intelligent
    Metaphor murder, saint John healer
    After few a ko, you still mesmerizing
    Don't take yal lines to seriously
    You might get a seizures
    Epilespsy style, f-ing too much yal lines, might gets Aids
    Stds ? , becareful notepad, what discover your minds powerful
    No crook, anylines mistaken, gets correctly
    Taking steps to new level, not ofending anyone
    Please for give Love, I'm doctor using up all my vocab skillz
    Becoming verbarl specialist, head surgeon, monster killa
    King Kong helicopter ferrari smasher
    Multies sound king, people confused as audio killa
    Stephen King, signing up Wes Cravens, but nothing stolen from Beatnuts
    Some might laugh at the man, but too deadly like Deadpool and Deathstroke
    Marvel comics and D.C fighters, blasting tracks like net mixtapes
    The ish is kool, when you learn, I go to school, get respected like a school bus
    After many practice, you'll get better like learning a fifth language
    I stay educated, workout, no ? , just flow skillz, watch miltary movies
    Go to church, stay positive, enjoy a good mouth, don't get punish
    I talk that stuff, to warn my self to watch out
    Or warn others, lifestyle is useful, some listen to church music
    Some work hard as import turner, automotive mechanics
    Sometimes they say I don't, makes sense, get a dictanary, and microscope
    Figure the verse out, its like area 51, mixed what's up year 2050
    Are we evea going to visit pluto?, being sarcastic saying thing stupid
    Slam dunk like Bird and Jordan, no one belives you
    This not high track, or cigarettes break, this is a clean food
    Food thought or sense of humor for the mind, just rough draft
    Kidding with you, soon a good freestyle will come true
    Reping the whole world, forgive what I said, Love ? and live good, thanks..lol