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  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited February 2011
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    In a middle warzone
    Suprisely unexpected guest
    Feeling those guyz in the commericals
    Advertising what hot and exclusive
    But I keep my mind right
    Rhymes focus, like power weapons
    Body armor protection like hostage
    Or hold up, kind of scarey but not really
    Still freestyling, not falling back, attacking bosses
    Like Contra, nothing destroy, Double Dragons
    Anwering all customers like Joe Almighty
    Customer service yo relax calm down
    Picking a bomb verse, like crates like Dj Envy
    Or Clue, or La Bamba, acting like Tim Mcgraw
    Your music love is being delivering like mail
    Suddenly everything turns like Total Recall
    Now I got the power, I have bible in my hand
    So forget the sorrows, and bad lucks
    Tell you a story what people want to hear
    Loving forgiviness, being together like ? 's childs....
  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited February 2011
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    Nothing serious, trying to finish our phd
    Be that doctor, enter that room show us love
    Or give them love, forgive our sins, and forgive there
    ? shows us love, giving us an understandable to care
    Share, friendship, love world, no world ending, forgive the past
    Finish school, then continue school, enjoy life of chuch, live class!
  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited February 2011
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    Keep flowing
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    Keep flowing
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    Keep flowing
    Trying to get back to the style
    You know cool and wild
    Chill in class, do homework
    Masters to Doctarn, is what's spoke
    12345
    Keep flowing
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    Keep flowing
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    Keep flowing
    Studying for test like yo
    Having all the anwser, like whoa
    Study good become good student
    Nah don't hate, I keep it educated,
    Like you too, why not, graduate
    Do good, and key later, that's the show
    Keep flowing
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    Keep flowing
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    Keep flowing
    Forgive our sin nothing real but true love
    Who care if you lose or get confuse
    Love ? , sorry for the actions
    Thanks to everything what ? gaves us
    Love to world forget being jealous and envy
    Sometime we get wrong, and we learn our mistake
    Once again, thanks lords for giving us life,
    Family, friends, and neighbors, thanks...
  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited February 2011
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    No losing no sight or vision
    I'm no daredevil, but with ?
    How I follow religion
    I listen to other
    Go to church, learn the next mission
    Then any lover or fighter, can receive a gift
    Decision or worst, we chose the best education
    Stay in school, become better student
    Then not knowing what to do
    But I keep mind, neva quit yo skills
    Imrpove follow others, and listen to ?
    Once again thank y'all from letting us rhyme
    And be enspire to many, everyone we have rapped
    Did a great job, no beef, just having fun
    Playing out like lyrics, deck of cards, nothing serious
    Thanktyou no tears, but cheers, enjoy the rest of the school year,
    focus serious, love y'all forgive our sins. Love family, friends, neighbors and ? ..period..one luv
  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited February 2011
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    Getting yo memory back
    Back to feeling better, back on track
    Feeling good, starting the future, getting back to work
    Taking care of business, back in business like Epmd, baseball like a pro
    Forget feeling broke, feeling rich is what we know, go to church, that's how we grow..
  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited February 2011
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    I keep freestyling
    Thanks to those who help me
    Got my verse tight, like knot
    Makes sure lines are corrected
    Veiwer can can tell, I flow about
    Good topics, have people singing,
    Every rhyme is luck, to make lyrics
    Marvelous and hot
    Plot loving my friends, people go
    Holla at them, I'm new, not a rapper
    Just an artist, when I key,
    I sometimes don't try
    But if they get emotional
    You probly wanna cry
    Because you'll didn't know
    I can freestyle amazing
    By just trying, also get more wising
    Forget shying, we together everlasting
    Maybe baby, up in the club, we blazing
    Making tracks in studio, amazing
    You and yo friends, make beats
    Bring the 70's back, ol skool, freshing
    Trucks, cars, dancing, music, lights
    Checking them like the Backstreet Boys
    Or Boyz to men, or Fulanitos
    Kiss band, Hot chill Pepper, or Wild style
    Forgive what we say, that
    Stuff, we neva mean, we just trying to grow
    You people are the best,
    Sorry we need to go back to church
    Back in the place where we pray
    Learn Christ, and life of the bible, love ? ...
  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited February 2011
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    Yo I like to freestyle
    Human or no human
    No matter what planet we land on
    We all like space agents
    Either that metaphor makes sense or not
    I'm still freestyling taking the pain
    Losing coming out as a winner like plane
    Pass the Taliban, made it back in Us one peace
    But no beef, my freestyle, enjoys travling the world
    Like Bobby' world in high school, or teacher after college
    Make sure the flow turn up Motor Trends fans, then
    My next line speaking knowledge
    The flow is love, no hate, like wrecked verse
    We flirting with rhymes, don't even know what punchline hurts
    They keep falling in love, like paragraph passing Harvard
    The flow makes my the bars laugh, for learning its practice
    Peace, we still loving the lord, thanking gods gifts, enjoy verse lighting
    Destroying all curses...from first to worst..
  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited February 2011
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    Forgive me yal, the group can't stop singing
    They probly happy for yal, like homerun swinging
    Best verse didn't came worst, but deliver true living
    Nature love, garden ? , roam free living spirit
    A cabin never haunting, if you speak well, a ghost might apear
    My flow is remarkable like you still listen to biggie
    Throw a party at the cabin, play yo favorite hits
    After college , finishing the doctaren, feeling poor and rich
    Making a living like balling players ready to win like finals talking to yo best priest..
    Love ? , keep up the best work, live like King and Queens, make yo life a miracle twist.
  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited February 2011
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    They try to get jelly, no offer
    Forget their swine flu, like whatever is better
    The lies of fun or fiction, or fact
    Flowing religion, make an decisions, before an attack
    Learning christs put them into raps
    Or rock, country make them good stories
    Live for the future, thanking what's good
    Smeling that baking pie, forget punishing
    Like prisoners but still graduating with honors
    Those guy think their real, we believe in ?
    Making good health sharing it, its good real like
    500 bars to share an conversation, like stone rock...
  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited February 2011
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    New release like Marvel vs Capcom 3
    Favorite lottery number 15, I'm like new flow
    Millionair, went from old shows like Hey Dude
    To new movies like X-Men I'm entering the new class
    Like New X-Men new class, finishing my last college class
    Math class like calculus and statistic, stilling learning I'm not a wreck
    The educational, I'm untouchable for not losing, and still loving ? couragous..
  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited February 2011
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    Godbless, thanks for lettings us back
    Not waste of track, freestlye straight
    Destroy all evil, believe in ? , I'm bright
    Happy b-d to my N, freestyling with best friends
    Respecting, ? protecting all family, good luck
    Lords takes care of everyone, good memory
    For making good history, to all good family
    Happy b-day to my N, freestyling with my best friends
    Good luck to there future, ? take care of us all
    Recall, nascar, family togethers, pray for all
    Pinos music playing, creative artistic, everyone did a good job
    Respecting there game, I hope you don't mind, How I explain it
    Thanks, to those teachers, ? blessing to there skill and knowlege
    Covered memory camouflage in blue, dark, light, invisible from any false power
    Thanks for letting the lighting strike to protect ? nature, like pre-k after college.
  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited February 2011
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    Apolgize to our forgivness
    For what we do, from wrong to bright
    Thanks for the Bible, for learning religion
    Keeping our verses bright and tight
    Like eagle, I visual the world beautiful
    Wonderful full of good nature, nothing awful
    Gods the light, no danger, church is beautiful.
  • RuffDraft
    RuffDraft Members, Writer Posts: 4,753 ✭✭✭✭
    edited February 2011
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    Church is beautiful,
    Like my ancestors,
    Traveling a dusty cold road,
    With problems in their conscience,
    A beast prowling in the night,
    Slithers it's tongue...
    as it steers to the right,
    With a quick pounce...
    a sharp movement into sight.
    A sword ceases it's tastes,
    with a scathing strike,
    Breathless panting relaxes
    and suffices the plight
    Midnight tales of a Sorcerer Warrior,
    determining a fight.
  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited February 2011
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    Thanks for showing the style
    Like a master ninja, showing crowds to smile
    Life is good, sometime can be a challenge
    So I continue the education like the bible
    Study yo best is the only why you'll beat the teacher
    They know there movements, but not the secerts
    Studying for years, don't call them warriors
    Call them hereo writers, or hereo type writers
    the whole flow is remarkable, listening
    Artist from Biggie, and St. Joesph, no biting
    But still continue to freestyle, rap, and ? 's light
    Forgive us again for what we trying to write
    We just trying to get better,
    Make the freestyles feel like a better talent
    Thank you, we still continue to freestyle like Turtles vs the Shredder....
  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited February 2011
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    Forgive the way I rip
    I Tell my rhymes to get a grip
    They cheer up, when lose there grip
    I'm back like Nfl, my freestyles are like
    Rumors of the next SuperBowl
    Which lines is going to be a lucky pick
    Nba happy B-day to J from the Bulls
    Have a happy 48 b-day and
    Happy B-day to my two cuz
    Hope yal do good yal day
    Have good all day may godbless
    To all who is having a b-day
    Have a nice day, take care
    Yal the best, don't forget that
    May good prayers take care of y'all
    Be eazy and stay safe much love to all of y'all..
  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited February 2011
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    Thanks for typing good verses...keep up the good work.
  • RuffDraft
    RuffDraft Members, Writer Posts: 4,753 ✭✭✭✭
    edited February 2011
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    My path resigns to the fact
    That my destiny will stay in tact
    Always there surrounding me
    Destinies fail
    As work prevails
    Workers Commenting on the next
    Instead of becoming on their own.
    A worker will criticise you
    Instead of realising that they can't change you
    Won't change themselves, stuck in the same job
    The same look resides but ages as time goes by
    Exit to their death will only realise their misfortune
    Missed opportunities on the cusp of disgust
    with lost lovers that they left untouched.
    As such, they commented instead living
    Envied instead of proposing
    A life that would have grew
    Only to fall short at the thought of something new.
    Never attained, observed but not gained.
    A waste of life obsessed with the next
    Instead of taking life and turning it into sex.
    Grasp what is yours when you perceive it in front of you
    A small step is all you need to reach the truth.
  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited February 2011
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    Sometimes we can't stop
    Enjoying life, but we enjoy life
    Sometimes I think of the past
    Then I said for what?
    Why don't we make those
    Memory again, feel young again
    Conversate what's yo favorite
    Activity, enjoy life again
    yeah baby, don't mean to be hard
    Or put the pressure
    Yup there still church in our life
    The lines is only hits hard
    When it misses connection line
    What connect in making good
    Relationship, beside that, still
    A good relationship grower
    Nothing can't stop our bars from
    Growing, lines are always falling in love
    When making perfect judgment
    Karate crew, with master skiils
    Who's stopping, they confuse them
    To be some ghost writer
    That fight crime, don't arrest them
    As Marvelous fighters, correct them
    Martial arts, that enjoy spirital belifes
    Still doing there duty, but you know
    Study is neva ugly, even if lose
    Who work the hardest, neva funny
    If we try to work the hardest
    We Stay fit, no junkie, when we write
    Its gets crazy, its hard to be lazy
    Being touched by wonderful writers
    Some writers bring us tears or fear
    Or cheer, we learn from eacher
    What's wrong with growing up
    Without living a mess, no stress
    Living life like wonderful dream
    Fly in a stream of sports
    Figure whats yo Experience
    Or what yo favorite appearce
    Sports, role playing, acting
    Or even making a movie
    Doesn't matter every poet
    Lives with ? , church is place
    To gain memory, learn history
    To forgive our problems
    Turn them to old stories
    Makes us Preist, to help
    Another friends, families
    With needs, then they turn
    To there own helper, and story
    Goes on, and goes on
    That's how we our freestyle
    The flow goes on and goes on
    And only ? can judge us
    Thanks again world,
    Life is beautiful, again and again
    Like garden of heaven
    Mastering the bibe, learning
    The chapters, ask yourself
    Where did ? take you?
    A cruise rollercoaster
    To reality of learning life
    Shaping Earth in a good Health..
  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited February 2011
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    Sorry back again to kick some freestyle
    Still verse slaming like the Clippers
    Over the car, style still no disarespect
    To no player or writer, the flow is just that's nice
    Skill educational the freestyle is still bright
    Still prays to christ, a ? beliver, rumors whisper
    Who's the flow behind bars mind, is still love yal
    Making remarkable, verse touching skillz, like paint on wall
    Artistic art wonders the mall of church, the love of ?
    We stand tall, sorry for what we do once again
    Forgive us once again, we know y'all tired of the same song
    So we keep improving, so forget what we try to say on song
    We old and young, life with ? is foreverlasting, we thank ? for making us strong..
  • q-dawg
    q-dawg Members Posts: 8
    edited February 2011
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    ? has mercy, I don't
    I never once atone for my sins
    Always postpone the date
    To step into life's combat zone
    Where I'm bombarding rivals with articulated artillery
    Armed with "state of the art" weapons
    Even Sun Tzu said
    My intellect is a "Destoryer"
    That is carrying guided missiles
    Aiming straight for the gray matter of opponents
    Hitting them twice, above their head because of square they are is what I call an exponent
    To hell with working in a cubical for 8-12 hours
    I love being outside the box
    I'm so caught up in this freestlye let me knock this last one out
    and pull out a suicide squeeze play to win the game of the day
  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited February 2011
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    On a day of recalcitrant
    Others fight like they rebelion
    Becuz of recession, reciprocal sessions
    Catalyst of non complicated catachetic
    Good times of syncretic life like amuletic
    Peace in heaven to U.GF, still athletic
    Good times like balletic
    Happy b-day a day ago to b-cuz
    And happy b to my other three cuz
    And to my Two friends, branchycataletic
    R.I.P to some of mynOfa an stmofrns be in peace
    Everything good using words like phyletic
    Reading churches others being balletic
    Still happy b-day to fam neighb, and friends
    Doing there things lettic picturing days like polygraph
    Polyphyletic, understanding life can be arithmetic..
  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited February 2011
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    Forget who knows
    Peace to the people in the world
    And heaven, coming back from work
    9-5 or 5-12 work all week, when break
    We study to become life of anchoretic
    Others anoretic, learning war of history
    Learning antiphoretic or apyretic
    Mind channel televised, no mason
    But learning religous while working
    Loading trucks or customer service
    Being on time, making companies happy
    Some issues are theoretic, karma protection
    On lines I type, protected by ? 's light
    Docetic, handling case's like docket
    Antipathetic filling info fresh like bathetic
    Technology becomes photosynthetic
    While other learning dietic
    Some are rhyming to become more like poetics.....
  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited February 2011
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    Nice verses keep up the good work!
  • thedesolateone
    thedesolateone Members Posts: 4,526 ✭✭✭✭
    edited February 2011
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    punish you with verses near perfect
    not filled with curses but creative
    show me what your made of
    dont be imitative or its laters
    haters are dated and belated
    faded to the backrounds
    these bars are a celebration
    sip andre spumante
    when i get buzzed i sound country
    but i get to spitting you can tell im hungry
    to vacate with a sun breeze ownin an island
    walkin around in my ? bonin fly chicks
    now who i sound like?bar for bar im deeper than you are
    like a ninja turtle i came from the sewer
    now need a better car tryin to own land
    so i take ? being chosen