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  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
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    Forgive our sin, we hear to win
    Forgive, if I'm sloppy with the vocab
    I'm just freestyling for the top
    From lab to studio playing court like Shaq
    Holding many books, only life after school
    Can judge the tracks, we nice even if we not even trying
    Mix style with Kung fu, now we trying
    What's the smiling?, I heard the one that's sing is kinda styling
    That's right! It's a freestyle no lying
    Mixing words like a salad bar, the word fresh is always flying
    We keep it healthy, while other keep there hot, some be crying,
    Deep feeling poetry, then we fudge that, we be like the other
    Always firing, no sadness, just hype, mic firing with turntable scratch skills
    Coool ice chill bars, no ? demon voice is shining but ? 's love voice is always hiring...
  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited March 2011
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    Hot fudge Brownies, some m.c's freestyle like vanilla cake
    The freestyle can feed many crowds out the stage
    And still come out great, either clown on the mic
    Or throne king no fake, keeps it real, verses out like case
    Focus like the Army, be all you can be, stay with ? at steady pace.
  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
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    Heavy weights like France soccer players
    When they hear's Love yal freestyles, its like gatorade
    Queches many ghost writer's qoutes comfort fear like coats
    But controls souls like laughters in jokes, relax minds like boats
    Have dj thinking twice before there turntable spoke
    While it serve his purpose he will beguile you
    Then twice or three times he will terrify you like Sirach qoutes
    these lines like loaf of bread, guard against being presumptuous
    Be not as those who lack sense, person of influence, keep your distance
    These messages qoutes are caution regarding is what the Sirach wrote..
  • thedesolateone
    thedesolateone Members Posts: 4,526 ✭✭✭✭
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    ^^^^^good freestyle

    you say you a mc but dont write
    your not biggin up you bite
    my styles smoothe and rude
    poetic devices and tools,words that refuse to lose
    causin epilepsy
    used to feel bad now it dont effect me
    not to my knowledge i make better choices
    i lept free of charges avoided crosses
    a rich man carries many oysters is my mystical motto
    stack champayne in glass bottles ,crash autos, and blast models
    my garage shows checkered flag car shows i now live for tomorrow
    creating environments thats stress free
  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited March 2011
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    Thanks I been practicing...you too had some really good freestyling, thanks for freestyling...keep up the good work.
  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited March 2011
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    My bars like suprising guest
    Yo vision think my line hot
    Don't get it confuse, I'm blessed
    Like holy water, I read good bible
    To figure out those disciples
    Play chess, with the elderly
    Feel young again, release stress
    Micorphone, ? speeches neva left
    Chair seated, face watch, the priest speak
    And get fed like holy scene from the west...
  • thedesolateone
    thedesolateone Members Posts: 4,526 ✭✭✭✭
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    temped by the tempest
    i will say a sentence
    leavin details censored
    dont wanna offend anyone
    general talking
    but i am the variable
    that leaves chemicals sparkin
  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited March 2011
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    * any instrumentals *

    Set the tracks
    And I'm let my train of thoughts
    Flow, like engine watch my freestyle go
    Watched the affliction of our fathers flow
    In Egypt, heard the tears in Red Sea like ? show
    Worked signs and wonders aganinst Pharoahs like whoa
    Read more of these Bible lines made me a beliver like that's ? who spoke.
  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited March 2011
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    Happy late B-day to Maywheather
    Knock you out with combos like Tj and Fulgore
    I'm automechanic freestyler work on yal like cars
    Fix up like a new engine, and start up like jump start
    Thanks ? for giving us good help from family or friend
    But don't mean to sound like I bite, I type too slick
    People say I'm alright, some moods I get hyped
    Maybe emotion slip, and ? takes over, and I type Bright
    I might sound the same, but becoming a true M.c is like sports
    Not being mentally challenge, but pro typing skills like flash light,
    While passing the freestyles of the phd course, but I love typing Tight!
  • thedesolateone
    thedesolateone Members Posts: 4,526 ✭✭✭✭
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    the hottest sneakers the illest leathers
    oh how i feel about spring weather
    punannys are wetter im in the limelights
    spumante keep my mind right
    what i can remember i thrust into the rhymes i write
    i try new things careful of what im choosing
    up partyin for two days with arts ,women and drugs stay amusin
    we are like sponges as we lay the music
  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
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    My lyrics went from sewerage to satisfaction
    Savage to savior, clean like sanitary, strong like sanitation
    Build a sand castle, while other use sarcasm, I use creativition
    keep concepts credential, other credence, some release like deputation
    Depopulation if these metas get deportation, comeback deposition
    No dereliction, learning deprivation, but defeating depression
    Not see derision, but being creative formed like derivation.
  • thedesolateone
    thedesolateone Members Posts: 4,526 ✭✭✭✭
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    smoke moves through the room and is thick
    heavy pulls from weed rolled cigars and cancer sticks
    blitz mental chess games came with answers quick
    only the money moved besides exotic dancers who were thick
    most of us was high people were talkin they ?
    some ? havin a good time but some ? were ?
    heard through the hood vine they was forming their clicks
    and they would be swarmin in a matter of minutes
  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited March 2011
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    Forgive my past, and there's no retribution
    When loved by a bible its hard for retirement, like reunion
    A set pair of new degrees is good revision, call it revitalization
    lyrics can also be revival, minds reader is the bible, read palms or revelation
    Postive messages can be reverberation, discussing discrimination
    Turn it to super revitalization, safe place church, then explain it like a information....
  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited March 2011
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    Destroy all emenies one shot
    The mic lyrics keep the world in shock
    Destroy all rumors, lines are strong as a rock
    The freestyle thread is the spot
    Oh ? ....playing the hottest jams in India
    That's the Block....yo I'm back like Batman
    And Robin....like comics..kicking freestyle
    Import tuners...carshows, rims spinning, living wild
    Ash Wednesday, not getting attack, but make sure we
    All go to church, get blessed, don't mind the world info
    Bible study is another way to pass the course,
    That's what we do, go to church, to get forgive and pass the course.
    Car, driven like airplane not sickin, manual stick, hot beats
    Drivin like porsche....cool windows, new style like 2012, no sleep
    Awake like bear, attacking this booth again, freestyle again
    Bring that church, keep learning, dj scratching, world makin
    Music again, askin world in the world my verse has been gone
    Lost verse, came back like new dna, let's freestyle again
    This the hottest ish I eva freestyle, keep freestyling, lovin ? n family
    Staying focus and maintaining.
  • thedesolateone
    thedesolateone Members Posts: 4,526 ✭✭✭✭
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    around these mental lab puppets i may be one of them or under them
    can harldy tell between day, night and evening so much mad fuckage
    all i have is my publishins and whatever is in this syringe
    in dreams im mad bubblin in melrose cars
    to i awake to casual horrors wonderin if i will ever leave again
    intendin to never sleep again the suffering is deepenin
    there no cell phone calls this hellhole never stops
    bout to climb out the crab bucket while getting hit with elbow drops
    stuck in redundance like velcro shirts velcro sweats and velcro socks
  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited March 2011
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    Just wait when my lyrics land
    I bring peace like rose garden
    Lyrics strong like mblwa or mclwa, slang
    Htmblwa and hmclwa, lyrics are like top ten
    Have rhymes to chum, sercuity like Fbi
    Everything I have said protection like cia
    Or gyeongchalgwan, but ? himinneun
    Lovin family and friends reciving good direction
    To all that helped thanks, forgive our sins, the bible has good instruction
    Like insurance no insurrection, metaphorically ? gives good directions...
  • thedesolateone
    thedesolateone Members Posts: 4,526 ✭✭✭✭
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    when i war
    all i want is the women
    i get facials
    from ? that are lemon tasty snacks like entenmanns
    bad boy say its all about the benjamins
    but it is more
    at times i am a beast and sometimes a gentleman
    got places for everything
    thats what i consider wealthy i spread it
    drove the highway with friends in every lane
    i am legend
  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited March 2011
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    not bad like watching a new movie
    Left vacation to get back to work
    Education as photo opportunity
    School focus like photo shots
    Stay good like photographic memory
    Physical education, learn physical therapy
    Something as physician working physically
    Testing phosphorus proceed productivity
    Make sure promo text shines like promontory..
  • thedesolateone
    thedesolateone Members Posts: 4,526 ✭✭✭✭
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    tell my dame i never came; i just arrived feel justified to look on celebrities with lustin eyes
    not even the best survive i surmise i toke just to try not to get high
    lifes a fistfight for better lives ,having money set aside even through there are some with lots but still dead inside
    and many change on their deathbed after they been revived its profound individuals are found after walkin many miles
    when im writing follow me into a black hole im mining pining grinding just to grasp coal expecting to be finding diamonds shining lining winding paths of cracked walls
    i feel like im half man half mole
    put on your glasses look at all of these facets when you know the carat soak it in acid and it will release trapped gases but tell me isnt it dazzling
    the article amongst professors freestylin in jam sessions the hours are investments clip nails turn to cresents
    need a sturdy chair
    i feel unearthly
    get up early brush your pearlys take a shower if your ? the world is ?
    will it ever stop i dont know im the scarecrow crucified in fields of mariquana checking the foyer cause of paranoia
    living like an otter woods and water stayin modest camping in the forest incase detectives try to collar us and whoever follows us im not a starving artist im a starving orthidontis thatll torch a modern to escape these hellish horrors in deep waters of creepy crawlers lies a buried novice they trace us through our dollars nosferatu drains blood from walruses its cathartic use to sip from the purest gold chalices and goblets getting brain ? choruses of melodic gothics blood gargling hob goblin rob robin hood then commit arson ? the ? talking nonsense my ears arent a toilet cause i started as a lowly microphone mechanic who could just oil it and spit rhymes to horses
    among the apple orchards now i move in clouds of nitrogen
    clogged sinuses fighting ticks lighting spliffs like a zionist
    against dictators with an iron fist these rhyme alterations are mental ? my fascination with building a verse like a skyscraper cause i spit like a spider my saliva produce silk fibers you checkmated before you realize it
    a criminal smoother than the moonwalk put your stomach in knots
    with new thoughts to erase you like chalk in two pops if i think you talked
    got a hole in my sock a black hole in my heart my herbs grow in the dark plus glow in the dark ill enough to flow in the dark just me and my thoughts on nightwatch raw meat controlling the dogs
  • thedesolateone
    thedesolateone Members Posts: 4,526 ✭✭✭✭
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    reciting poems from his journals
    horror scripts with morals alligators swimming by corals
    eyes on the wickedest oracle
    lookin for a cure-all for fossilized mortals
    return of the black plague nosferatus cat has gone missing
    then there was a disappearance at the time he had gone fishin
    only ? zombies will no volition saw his vision
    soon a supermoon will loom so he got to business
    by being haunted by spirits of a witness
    checks every room comin home from work late
    sins cause earthquakes and sure makes for interesting birthdays
    the doors left open and death awaits
  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
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    Thanks for the freestyles, I'm back with more styles
    Happy early b-day to my self, and my two brothers and few sisters
    mothers, fathers and aunts and two uncles happy b-day, life is wild
    Going a world of a maze is really amazing, exploreing minds of styles
    An artist mind, that visuals, arts of school, as cars of schools makes smile
    Cheer up, this is the new year, party enjoy the world, be cool as X-file
    Continue education, mind on church, focus on well reading, picking a new style
    Chilling with the family, friends, and neighbor having fun as child
    With mature wise features, rolling good grades giving by teachers,
    Back to the church reading the bible, putting effort on what's important
    Begin to smile as we proceed, we get better, just freestyle, learning betters
    Ways to be equal, enumerate as envelop making life enviable
    Besides being ephemeral, equanimity lines into stories leave it epicable
    Becoming environmentalist goods envision, entrust not being inhospitable
    Or difficult as inimitable, being possible to learn from each other,
    Positive commucational, forgiveness to being helped by ? instructional..
  • Tupacfan
    Tupacfan Members, Moderators Posts: 2,428 Regulator
    edited March 2011
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    Dang!

    What a beautiful site to see, full of verses with verbs that brings vivid images to the screen..

    Love that!

    keep dropping em and keepin the freestyle alive..

    peace!
  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited March 2011
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    tupacfan wrote: »
    Dang!

    What a beautiful site to see, full of verses with verbs that brings vivid images to the screen..

    Love that!

    keep dropping em and keepin the freestyle alive..

    peace!



    Thanks Tupacfan, Its been while you've dropped by, how's everything going?....I been working my best with the friends in this site, helping in all parts to make a good verse. I went from freestyling to battling and learning new things. Once again thanks for having me on this site. I thanks you and all the friends on this site..I try to be on my best behavior..lol...but I'm still trying to improve my writing skills maybe do an
    audio one day and make a video...nah..just kidding..lol....but I'm continue to write better, its good education....thanksyou....goodluck in your writing skills....and take care.
  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
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    Its all good, forgive the headers
    Covered by protection, while others headphone
    Listing to the headquaters, head set, head start
    Head first, reading good letters, thanks to world
    Cheering up, seeing good view headland, headline
    Excellent letters, bible studies headhunting, life better
    Positive ways headstrong, message heads up, life better
    Freestyling heavy metal singing as heavy set heavy weighter
    Forgiving what's bad turn it to good style Hebrew others hector
    Indefatigable good indeed..lyrics indescribable or indestructible
    Instruct messages to sweater to sweater saying you doing good
    Loving ? is feathers living life to everyone better..
  • thedesolateone
    thedesolateone Members Posts: 4,526 ✭✭✭✭
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    i purge rappers when i earl swine
    craft wars with weaponary that effects the world wide
    cant unveil my design but global warming is a tell-tale sign
    in some dimensions of time im dead and still alive
    shout out to marty mcfly but these are doc brown raps in real time
    so somehow you will be primitive always while im prime