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  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited February 2011
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    Peace to my homies n girlies
    Happy day to my two favorite Uncle
    ? bless the world, thanks for its nature
    Live happy early, later still live happy like yearly
    They who shall turn back to there lands
    Minds set against the Holy covenant
    Arrange matters and return to its land
    Become chapters books thumb curly, leave Daniel
    Fan read books early, everything that's
    Relates what's Daniel says will prayers
    Unthristy his books will keep you full
    In spirites worthy..
  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited February 2011
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    My flows doesn't have too murk too many
    The verse is practically owned by a mind not ugly
    But don't force it, like stormy storm
    The bars can get ballistic, its hard to sound
    Simplistic, I always pray for my forgiveness
    The style can be nice or kind, but when gets
    Mean it enjoys a nice battle, but for a friend
    For a friend I enjoy churches with nice music
    My friends plans don't mean to be greedy
    It happen he enjoys to rap, so he raps
    With his battlers, friends and family
    When he gets caught rhyming, they see
    Him studying his major, already wants to
    Get through with school, get a career
    Teach teachers, become teachers,
    Probly teach about cars, once to many
    Experience, probly work with import tuners
    Conversate to many, how they build those
    Vehicles, his mind is not evil, so don't worry
    About how he knows other that rip education
    And there friends become good students early
    They thanks ? , they thank friends, and special
    Places, where they speak poets, poem for poem
    A freestyle where we key, make stories, like staying
    Fit, like mentally physical studies, feeling like church
    Story, how we flowing with skillz.
  • q-dawg
    q-dawg Members Posts: 8
    edited February 2011
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    Words hitting harder than corundum
    On the Cerebullum
    An edible delicacy for a lyrical cannibalist
    Let me give you some flavor
    with this verbal soy sauce
    For your verse was DIM in SUM parts
    While My style is a ancient chinese secret
    I'm a Ryu shoryuken
    Destroying simple punch-line rappers
    This isn't tongue to cheek
    I'm deadasss
    Opponents can kiss where the sun shine
    Only a few more times
    ? can bless you
    But soon I will find you
    and Leave you with life oozing from your chest cativity
    Buried you twelve feet deep
    so you will die twice as fast
    if you want to test me, just say my name once.......
  • thedesolateone
    thedesolateone Members Posts: 4,526 ✭✭✭✭
    edited February 2011
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    eat your verse with chops sticks
    aint a secret its lunchtime
    dont need a punchline
    you john starks im mj at crunchtime
    you sometime im always
    while i give you the business you can parlay
    you weaker than crippled ? midgets
    im stronger than eight feminist ?
    your bars arent the truth they are just wishes
  • q-dawg
    q-dawg Members Posts: 8
    edited February 2011
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    You are the 2011 MJ,a bitter old man
    why want you just jump man
    life isn't for you
    swallow some more testosterone
    to calm your female tenencies
    Quit editing your verses
    They were ass then
    And I jusy bypass this one
    Didn't even bother reading it
    Kneel before your ?
    and beg me to spare your LYRICALl life from EXECUTION
    Yet Its no saving you from wackness
    You got it running through your veins
    How many lames does it take to screw with the wrong one?
    Just you......
  • thedesolateone
    thedesolateone Members Posts: 4,526 ✭✭✭✭
    edited February 2011
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    quote my ?
    then claim you aint read it
    thinkin you top seeded
    your just weeded
    you a gal
    waitin to exhale
    so keep blowing Ls
    cause all you do is fail
    and fall on your face
    your a waste of space
    hiding that you ?
    so you take girls on dates
    trick on em
    so they pretend yall mates
    you are a disgrace to the keyboard
    ill have it connected to c4
    so when you press a key
    you have a nde you see your lord
    yeah i do edit maybe you should
    gassed that your ? good
    when its just mudd
    when you break my ? down
    you see that its good
  • q-dawg
    q-dawg Members Posts: 8
    edited February 2011
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    Bored of these games
    time to take this country boy out to pasture and put a bullet in his brain
    Your words are paraplegic
    They have no legs of truth stand on
    I will hand you victory
    Then snatch it from you
    How long can silly rappers to pretend to be ill?
    Only until I ? them
    I SAW you creep your ass back in here
    Time to get my Jigsaw on with this lame
    Let me go grab the hammer
    better yet the chainsaw and cut you limb from
    Toss your decapitated carcass into an oven
    Thats a glorious death especially coming from a Narcissist like myself
    You stated I'm a gal
    Well madam, I mean sir, whatever
    Are a HeBitch, A SHIM
    You catch my drift
    So lift up your skirt and show the world what you really made up of
  • thedesolateone
    thedesolateone Members Posts: 4,526 ✭✭✭✭
    edited February 2011
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    your wiggity wack you dont rhyme right
    you seen to many movies
    too many daydreams of the limelight
    im a usual suspect to set you up like kobayashi
    show you a real knife like an aussie
    your not fly and you a rat
    so ill bite your head off like im ozzy
    ? women and kids
    torture your love ones
    then give instruments to you to torture yourself
    to prove how much you love them
    cant cover up the smell of death with perfume
    its over im the soul controller
    and its your lifes curfew
    with sharp and blunt objects and plenty words that are hurtful
    dig the grave first then murk you
  • q-dawg
    q-dawg Members Posts: 8
    edited February 2011
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    This phony with his unphonetic verses
    keep coming to talk like we homies on the phone
    take your ? ass back to a lady gaga forum
    I see you richard simmons trying to pull lyrics out your ass
    Swear its freestyle, without an edit
    I'ma force feed you these bomb I'm dropping and detonate it
    Showing everyone on the outside
    that deep down inside you are ?
    with all the pink and yellow bile
    I am a mellow guy until you push me
    Thats why I haven't beasted than feasted on this ?
    Cuz He isn't even touching me
    my intellect has a force field around it
    making weak individuals like you yield with your tough talk
    and kneel before this achillies
    without the messed up heel
  • thedesolateone
    thedesolateone Members Posts: 4,526 ✭✭✭✭
    edited February 2011
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    you mad ? eaten crab cakes
    you angry ? from bagdad
    suicide bomber with jet lag
    who ethered theirself and took no one with you of course
    your mind has no forcefield your lines are just forced
    like amelia earhart just accept you lost
    this aint amateur night
    you aint got the stamina to fight
    i aint gotta talk tough i will just put the hammer to your mike
    this is lyrical castration
    no bacitracin dont be confused
    this verse aint beef its your education
    should of brung an apple for me
    edits are just extra credit
    your lines you said it then regret it
    put you on timeout no recess kid
    dig deep in your head to reach your farthest recesses
    your brain is silly putty best to stick to your lessons
  • q-dawg
    q-dawg Members Posts: 8
    edited February 2011
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    Speaking of education
    its themselves not theirselves
    you fool
    Somebody getting serious huh
    I am curious
    am I getting to this bi curious rapper?
    No need to be fly when you live in the clouds
    You are typing out references from wikipedia
    I know I'm not your perference I like women
    and you like guys that like guys
    Whats more disgusting
    then this backwood, cousin lover
    still sipping milk from his mom ?
    country ass uncle tum
    My style that is
    I will put bullet holes from this lyrical gatling gun
    In your coogi shirt nine sizes to big
    leave you ? in your gibard jeans
    Got you talking Oh Lordy Lordy
    please become bored with me
    No my child, until i hit you in the core
    I want your last born to feel this ass whopping, you want more?
  • q-dawg
    q-dawg Members Posts: 8
    edited February 2011
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    These all jokes just to let you know nothing more serious than a freestyle, no hard feelings I want to check out some more of the board, but good freestyle homie you got skills. Peace maybe we can finish this another time
  • thedesolateone
    thedesolateone Members Posts: 4,526 ✭✭✭✭
    edited February 2011
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    alright ill see peace
  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited February 2011
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    The flow is sexy, so let's see
    The bars are like babes, they blind
    M.c's, I'm like terminix how I battle m.c
    Got ? more these bugs, let's get
    This freestyle poping, have you escaping
    Like Mary Popping, my verse can calm
    Down kids, so chill out toddlers
    Every word I type, makes you think
    Twice, besides the kids, I knock out
    Bugs cold out, I leave m.c's verses raid out
    Disappear these roaches, spiders, ants
    Any style these bug m.c come up with
    They get disapear, My hot flow terminix still appears...
  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited February 2011
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    You left the booth early
    Because you got offended
    Someone told you got bad breath
    Beside the way you came prepared
    I call you a bad mess, you waste of ryhmes
    I released my bad stress, Diss yo soul
    Because your freestyle are no threats
    I alright bro or Sis, show me what you got
    When you freestyle, I get props like the Packers
    You still lip rapping from others artist, then bite and say its yours
    Not really, they catch more biters, than cops after there donuts
    No offense, yo flow is too light, a kit's best friends, you fly away easy
    For sheezy, ? , your verse is too lazy,
    When I say wack freestyle, and mention I you, people go crazy!
  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited February 2011
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    Some write stories, some write songs
    Some write lyrics, some write class notes
    My behind should get back to class
    Read a book, and while I study the quotes
    Nothing wrong stepping yo game up
    Taking a exam or test, later read what they wrote
    A+ plus student, A honor roll like my rap skills
    I just get better when I don't try, but chill
    Listen to my people, they always freestyling
    They known to be artistic like Wild Style
    They been out longer when Dj red alert
    was starting the jams, from Crazy legs
    Mister C mixtapes, grew up listing to Kid Capri
    To now Dj Funkmaster Flex to Cutmaster C
    What's the dealy'o...the crew is heavyweight makes
    Noise louder then Red Hot Chill Pepper, Kiss
    Aerosmith and Rolling stones, but not biting off
    Any M.c's, just fooling around with the scenario's
    Day or Night studying like we freestyleing
    Studied so much, yal think school is record deal
    Company, education is what make career happen
    also no joke, we go to church, where we pray for
    Our forgivness, and Love ? , and that's how we keep it real.
  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited February 2011
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    Few lines I drop, will repair dyslexia typers
    We all read what you talk about
    Its nonsense, but good thing no one
    Takes y'all serious, don't go ballistic
    Yal will do fine, chill.., let I finish the freestyle
    Sport hustler, to working out in the field
    A true athleth, warrior with skills
    Watch too much re-runs I only said we love ?
    Bible reader, its basically where we get out style from
    Deliver a nice verse, and rhyme, no wasting time
    Every line we spend, is worth the time, no matter
    What we do, in Gods world like the sun, we always sunshine..
  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited February 2011
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    Its all good
    Hearing yal sing
    Let's makes songs
    To live our albums strong
    Make record deals
    And call it a Master's business degree
    We keep learning like Honor roll students
    Keep flowing, when we at church, we keep growing
    Conversation with the intelligents
    Helping the disable learning, no one is handicap
    Until you help them
    My Christians ways, make sure we stay above with the Lord
    To all people godbless
    Forgive those, and we keep reading the bible
    To understand, whether you women or man
    This world is Gods land
    We listening to all bosses responsibilties
    To become a better worker, go to school
    To learn our learning disabilites, no ?
    After class we chill probly freestyle or play some sports
    Listing to christ and ? , the bible feeds us when we get hungry..
  • thedesolateone
    thedesolateone Members Posts: 4,526 ✭✭✭✭
    edited February 2011
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    love yal creating the threads good as scrambled eggs
    mayo on the bread i got cheese to spread
    why instrumentals are bakin im makin rhymin lines of another creation
    well lettered linguist turn rappers to r&b singers
    what you recite into the mic i use as ?
    the masked microphone mangler break you down angular
    this is why speakin to strangers is dangerous
    dopplegangers get exposed to flows like lukewarm getting exposed to cold
    thats been known to cause trolls to crawl when i roll i expose your flaws
    like sanford&son i will hold your heart
    deeper than questions with no answers
    my raps are lyrical cancers another way of saying im ill
    is life like playing cards? get caught cheating get killed?
    ddt the joker its over when i expose him to solar
    know to roll up soon as we hop in the volvo
    try to escape town but was stopped by a boulder
    made me feel like legend of zelda the hunger tears you asunder
    between the younger and the elder im wedded to helgar
    when vikings come to plunder you move like runners
    with the forward and rewindable alphabet paint me as the goat baphomet
    before quotes put an asterisk
  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited February 2011
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    Thanks to Thedesolateone, for spiking up the style
    Freestyle is still cool like passing through the city
    Taking trips to Middle Eastern, free tickets, from winning
    a freestyle contests, we keep freestyling, like celebrity conversation
    Change topics, exchange concepts, learn from each others logics
    Sharing Knowledge, the flow is wild like 6 flags free rides rollercoasters
    Keep the artistic ways like religous protraites, every beat
    That's spoke, its hot track, like new instrumentals, work silk like X- Files
    Smooth lyrics and hot like fire, while others are light or mild
    This freestyle is like the Knicks vs. The Heats, a good game
    Giving props to all players like sports freestyle hasn't change, but adding new styles.
  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited February 2011
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    Still many days of tommorrows
    waiting games like Lakers or The Falcons
    Or Barcelona or Tony hawks or game of Red sox
    Flow handsome like jalsaenggida
    Verses still guilty like joechaekgameulneukkida
    Its beoreut, how we keep flowing, feeling haengbokhada
    Every rhyme we share is like saehae bok mani badueseyo
    Thanks playa again, we keep freestyling jinjja showing good jeseucheo
    Generous like neogeureopda, keep it cool like jadongcha, listening tracks like ayo
    Or back listening to church music,
    or listing to anything keeping it cool everyday, like cool flow
    Also forgiving our sins, godbless everyone, no harm, and yo
    That how you keep a good freestyle show.
  • thedesolateone
    thedesolateone Members Posts: 4,526 ✭✭✭✭
    edited February 2011
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    brain waves cause emcees to be wiped out judges cant agree more
    spread fingers over the keyboard flow like the eastern seaboard
    the price is always right with credit card swipes
    its a downloadable life in this daily fight for gigabytes
    survive as the mic booth recluse
    emerge only when the c.p.u. needs a reboot
    i exhale freestyles for three rounds
    inhale weed clouds in intervals
    inside a sinners soul is wet dreams of centerfolds
    like an exhale of breath in the winters cold
    just a simile of when i flow
    it can get erratic
    more shocking then rubbin slippers on carpet for static
    vodka and cranberry concoction money gives you options
    maybe in new hampshire on the range taking shots at targets
  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited February 2011
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    Capture scriptures, leave role models protected
    Like good defense, players always scoring like soccer field
    Speacial forces, sneaking in swamps, ready to land a freestyle
    World changes like pilgrums and indians, decreasing politcal rumors
    To politcal heaven world rumors, forget getting stuck in traffic humors
    Building shining, lights everywhere, cars passing, destroying tumors
    Active like ball player, knowning its offense and rebounds, these bars are powerful
    Turning to the disciples in private like privileges of discipleship
    Many prophets and kings desired to see, what we see
    Like Greatest Commandment, scholar of law, love the lord as read
    Will give you strength as we hear it and see from ? who teach
    True belivers become good warriors, live like Heaven Angeles that came down to preach...
  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited February 2011
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    Capture scriptures, leave role models protected
    Like good defense, players always scoring like soccer field
    Speacial forces, sneaking in swamps, ready to land a freestyle
    World changes like pilgrims and indians, decreasing politcal rumors
    To politcal heaven world rumors, forget getting stuck in traffic humors
    Building shining, lights everywhere, cars passing, destroying tumors
    Active like ball player, knowning its offense and rebounds, these bars are powerful
    Turning to the disciples in private like privileges of discipleship
    Many prophets and kings desired to see, what we see
    Like Greatest Commandment, scholar of law, love the lord as read
    Will give you strength as we hear it and see from ? who teach...
  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited March 2011
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    The vibe is good like breezy wind
    rides are like Nightrider's mission
    Rollercoaster flow ready to win
    Forgive us for being so selfish
    This freestyle rap is good like fresh salad
    With a cup of h20, snacking fruits in a dish
    Rhymes are rich like gold, but listening ? 's
    We are not poor, we stay together like Heaven's army
    Listening church music in round disc, forgiving our sins
    More rich freestyles, that make m.c's be there own disc jockey...